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Memories and Old Melodies

Tonight, as I gaze at a blood red moon in the sky, I hear the rhythmic pattering of gentle rains. Memories and old melodies, I recall with a sigh, as the sweet fragrance of red roses remains. I hear the rhythmic pattering of gentle rains. I'm reminded of another time and another day, as the sweet fragrance of red roses remains. The day he proposed with a crimson bouquet. I'm reminded of another time and another day. With his love declared, I wanted nothing more. The day he proposed with a crimson bouquet and the velvety petals that made my heart soar. With his love declared, I wanted nothing more. But now, the sugared scent of blooming roses, and the velvety petals that made my heart soar, cause my heart to ache. Oh, such pain it imposes. But now, the sugared scent of blooming roses, memories and old melodies, I recall with a sigh, cause my heart to ache. Oh, such pain it imposes, tonight, as I gaze at a blood red moon in the sky. May 16, 2022 A Rhyming Pantoum of Five Stanzas Contest Hosted by Milt Hankins

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/6/2022 11:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your podium win Jenna. Sight and scent has such an ability to carry back in time. You have wonderfully articulated the ambivalence of time travel through memory. Blessings

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/16/2022 4:32:00 PM

Thanks so very much, Sam.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 6/6/2022 7:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest. A heartfelt write. :)Paulette

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/6/2022 7:52:00 AM

I'm grateful for your congrats, Paulette, Thank you.

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/5/2022 10:46:00 AM

Heya Jenna back with congratulations on your top trophy win, I knew this one was always going to floor Milton, well done! Cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/6/2022 7:52:00 AM

You certainly did call it, David. Thank you so very much.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/4/2022 5:49:00 PM

The metaphor of red Moon and red roses is not lost in this beautiful piece Jenna. This form is difficult to write without the lines seeming forced. This is an excellent example of how to write one correctly. Congratulations on your wonderful trophy, it is well deserved! Blessings xxoo

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/4/2022 6:20:00 PM

Thank you so sincerely for your kind thoughts, Connie. This form does require editing and patience. A challenge, but when it comes together, it’s worth the effort.

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/4/2022 3:35:00 PM

Jenna, how you express yourself is what makes your poetry unique and qualifies it as art, well written my friend, Emile.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/4/2022 6:16:00 PM

What charming remarks you’ve offered, Emile. Thanks ever so much.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/4/2022 12:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!! What a "Beautiful" write and picture. Have a blessed day/weekend..........................

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/4/2022 6:15:00 PM

I’m so glad you like it. Thanks, Paula.

Ann Peck

Date: 6/4/2022 9:28:00 AM

That's so beautiful and poignant, Jenna. Every line fits so perfectly. Congratulations on First!

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/4/2022 6:14:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Jeff Kyser

Date: 6/4/2022 7:59:00 AM

Very nice, Jenna! Congrats

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/4/2022 8:26:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jeff.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/4/2022 7:57:00 AM

Jenna, surprised??? I'm not. This poem was the cream of the crop, in my humble opinion. Congratulations for the trophy win in my Pantoum contest. It's a lovely poem, and I am quite pleased.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/4/2022 8:26:00 AM

Yes, I am, Milt. I'm always surprised with a win, and sometimes with an N/A. Thank you for honoring my lines. I read many of the entries, and I think at least 5 others were top notch quality. I didn't envy you for having to judge.

Charles Reese

Date: 5/27/2022 9:16:00 PM

A very heartfelt Pantoum and so full of imagery. You should do well in the contest.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/4/2022 8:08:00 AM

Thank you very much, Charles.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/20/2022 5:46:00 AM

WoW! Jenna, You composed such a well-written entry for the contest. It’s not a good feeling when a love such as this goes cold. Good content and imagery. Best wishes for contest. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Jenna Logan
Date: 5/20/2022 11:59:00 AM

It's heartbreaking, but we are not immune to the pain, nor falling in love. Thanks, Alexis.

John Watt

Date: 5/19/2022 2:01:00 PM

Absolutely stunning in imagery, emotion, and heartbreaking melancholy, Jenna. The sights, sounds, and smells we experience may trigger pleasant memories or bring back thoughts we wish we could leave behind. My favorite line is "the velvety petals that made my heart soar." The blood red moon and eclipse on Sunday was remarkable and apparently was the inspiration for this amazing pantoum... a Fav. Blessings ~ John

Jenna Logan
Date: 5/20/2022 11:58:00 AM

One thing for sure, John. Memories cannot be suppressed, no matter how we try to stop their flow. Thank you for such kind comments.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/18/2022 12:41:00 AM

Lots of sadness in your verse Jenna and quite emotional. I find this form a tricky one to compose. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 5/18/2022 5:19:00 AM

It’s a bit of a boo hoo write, but that’s where my pen took me. Thanks, Tom.

David Kavanagh

Date: 5/17/2022 8:45:00 AM

I can see your well on the mend Jenna, inspiring romantic poetry, with a hint of Greek tragedy evolving throughout, You will have Milton sighing and crying reading this one, brilliant work, all the best for contest, cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 5/17/2022 8:48:00 AM

Thanks a lot, David. I actually started writing this before my illness, but thought it deserved to be completed. We shall see what he thinks of it. It's one of the few I've entered into any contest lately.

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/16/2022 4:28:00 PM

Outstanding poetry in this difficult form, Jenna! The romantic imagery and creativity are beautiful to read. Love this one! Best of luck in the contest! :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 5/16/2022 5:32:00 PM

Thank you, Laura. It DOES take some thought and rewriting to have a Pantoum make sense, but worth the effort.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/16/2022 3:52:00 PM

I like how this takes you on a journey through happy, then sad, times, a touch of mystery also, and it concludes so well, nice inspiration of the red moon too, Jenna~

Jenna Logan
Date: 5/16/2022 4:23:00 PM

Thanks so very much for your kind comments, Michelle.