Memories

We would talk everyday,
every night,
all the time,
whenever we could, 
we would talk.
I remember everything,
Talking and walking,
doing stupid things,
using our imagination for everything we did,
we would go caming all the time,
we did everything together,
perople thought we were twins,
we looked alike,
talked alike,
acted alike,
as did everything the same,
i will never forget any of the memories,
ever.
will i ever get to see you again?
probably not,
you mom pulled you away from me,
and i miss you so much,
i miss everything we did,
everything we said,
i just miss everything about you,
but someday,
i really hope, we can meet again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 2/5/2011 6:26:00 PM
smile -- so much love and hearts yearning found amid this soulful canvas my dear -- tis always such a pleasure to behold although, much more so when one finds the brighter than gray and yet, still the same, beauty is beauty and i find none greater than that from the deepest of precious hearts and Souls so, keep brushing and, i am certain one day that, destiny shall entwine your hearts once more ~ excellent painting in the rubies red ~ love, christopher ~
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Date: 2/5/2011 3:30:00 PM
Sad expressions on the lost love and its feelings, Sierra
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Date: 2/5/2011 3:02:00 PM
Yes exactly i like to write things teens can relate to, also things that happen to me in my life. thak you everyone for all the kind comments appriciate it :)
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Date: 2/5/2011 2:27:00 PM
deep write Sierra, a story many young girls could connect to, there's always that one boy you remember that stole your heart swept you off your feet, but parents push that away from you thinking it's whats best because they judge the boy before he even matures, deep write, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 2/5/2011 2:17:00 PM
How sad that your mother couldn't understand the bond you shared and recognize how important it was to you, Sierra. I do hope you find your way back to each other again. Best wishes, Carolyn
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