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Mid February dreams amongst the winds of change I am waiting for the season to relinquish its hold like the frost on the rooftops, the snow at my door sooner or later will be no more... I am watching the pine tree swaying in the cold sun dipping its branches, courtesies of a winter's day A piano plays softly in the background as I sit here contented as a well fed cat Mid February dreams amongst the winds of change From my rocking chair, lavender fields remembered sun born kisses with eyelet flashes of white linen suntanned arms raised before a blue, blue ocean airborne on a surfing board secured as an eagle like a beach boy I flew, and who ever knew She came to me like an August dream and slipped her tiny hand in mine, we became one like the summer stars in the sky when they bly from my rocking chair lavender fields, I remember Winter enclosures well aged in composure I sit to admire the view, amazed at how everything secretly, expires.

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Date: 2/24/2024 12:11:00 PM
I love it when you write from your heart, I remember when I first met you back in 2015... How we both have developed as poets and how we show our emotions has changed so much.... I think we are both so much more proficient.... this is so nostalgic and touching...
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/24/2024 2:54:00 PM
You made me smile, yes I remember when we first met lol, we have come along way dear friend, I'm proud of you and your accomplishments :)
Date: 2/24/2024 10:28:00 AM
Isn't lavender a gracious perfume? It's the only perfume I can tolerate. However, your poem is great and memories are always necessary. Hugs.
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Date: 2/24/2024 2:55:00 PM
Thank you so much for your presence here Victor, I appreciate every word you say
Date: 2/24/2024 10:17:00 AM
"Winter enclosures well aged in composure I sit to admire the view, amazed at how everything secretly, expires." I had never really thought of it that way "secretly expires..." but it does, and a blessing we are not always consciously aware. Brilliant write!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/24/2024 2:55:00 PM
Yes everything goes in its own time, sometimes more privately that we would like Joe, I'm a watcher so I like to see, lol, thanks for reading
Date: 2/24/2024 5:48:00 AM
"I am watching the pine tree swaying in the cold sun dipping its branches, " Absolutely love this! Be back to finish in a little bit, my cat demanding my attention. Blessings.
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Date: 2/24/2024 2:56:00 PM
I love cats,
Date: 2/23/2024 8:02:00 PM
“Sit like a well-fed cat.” I too am ready for the change of weather. Hugs and blessings my dear friend
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/24/2024 2:56:00 PM
lol, I know not far away one more month dear heart
Date: 2/23/2024 4:51:00 PM
I love memories, and you've captured yours magnificently, dear Rose. The 2d verse was engaging and I loved the 'lavender fields.' The first verse was calming and serene setting the perfect tone for your poem. I especially liked 'I am waiting for the season to relinquish its hold like the frost on the rooftops.' This poem was so you in its tone and softness. A lovely read. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 2/23/2024 6:07:00 PM
Thank you Sara for reading and commenting, you made my heart happy
Date: 2/23/2024 1:16:00 PM
Mystic, absolutely beautifully penned, outstanding writing, I love your poem, hugs, Constance
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/23/2024 4:08:00 PM
Your really made my day Constance, sending you love and friendship ties xo

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