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                           December 8, 2023

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"Memory can be our greatest friend or greatest foe." ~ quote by poet Laud precious memories when cold nights prevail those that fan loves' flames as Winter winds wail for upon those images a lonely heart will set sail if only in an interlude where grief may not assail Mourns the heart when memories are bittersweet Each one a plunging dagger blade of wintry sleet A mighty foe one cannot banish or cast in defeat for with each revived attack, pain is wont to repeat No human can escape the sorrow and abysmal fall of teardrops when unbidden memories befall us all There's no antidote to stave off that sudden squall of sad recollections melancholy minds often recall But there are melodious moments of dulcet thoughts in which flows trickling memoires where joy imparts the rushing through veins until canvassed in hearts as treasured paintings; unforgettable works de' arts When a smile, sans apparent reason, plays across lips and eyes shine as though emerging from an eclipse there will have been a memory, perhaps in short clips a prize to relish as the fine wine a connoisseur sips

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Date: 12/12/2023 6:49:00 AM
Great quote, great poetry, Lin. Your rhyming skills are impressive, my friend. Congratulations on its win! Memories are two edged swords, a pleasure or a curse they may be. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 12/11/2023 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write with a Great quote. If only we could only remember the good times/memories. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 12/9/2023 7:15:00 AM
Yes, relish those great memories because they are precious. Thanks for sharing your contest entry with us and for dropping by my page. This one reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/10/2023 6:43:00 AM
We shall see about the contest placement, but I'm happy to have received so many lovely comments, like yours, Sara. Thanks.
Date: 12/8/2023 10:56:00 PM
We all have memories, both happy and unpleasant ones. If only we could block out the unpleasant ones from our memories. Love your quote too Lin. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/10/2023 6:43:00 AM
I'm afraid that's a 'no can do,' Tom. Thanks for the kudos and liking the quote.
Date: 12/8/2023 6:24:00 PM
I liked the contrasting style of this poem. It kept interest to an ending which seemed to glide into the present. May your memories be happy. Many thanks.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/10/2023 6:42:00 AM
Thank you, Hilda. It IS a titch long, so thanks for reading it in its entirety and for your interest.
Date: 12/8/2023 12:38:00 PM
A true Lin masterpiece right there! Love this Lin….you are so gifted with words! Debx
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/10/2023 11:20:00 AM
Both of you make me smile. Hugs, sweet friends.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/10/2023 8:21:00 AM
I beg to differ Lin, you are.
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Deb M
Date: 12/10/2023 8:00:00 AM
Well l think you are Lin….very talented creative lady! Debx
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/10/2023 6:41:00 AM
You are a kindhearted friend, Deb, but I'm not a master poet. I DO treasure you, dear Deb, and Thank you!
Date: 12/8/2023 11:32:00 AM
Beautiful:) This is extremely well written, Lin.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2023 11:38:00 AM
Many thanks for reading and leaving such thoughtful reviews for my poetry, Danny.

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