Memories

the oaks so grown up leaves falling falling so far down 10/13/2018

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/15/2018 4:15:00 PM

love the image of leaves swirling down like pale reminisces, kim... spill ink!..huggs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2018 4:34:00 PM

Thank you, dear Nette!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2018 3:47:00 PM

so true, the picture you paint says it all.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2018 4:33:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Andrea! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/15/2018 11:59:00 AM

Nice snapshot. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2018 12:24:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon!

Chris Green

Date: 10/15/2018 11:17:00 AM

Yep, it is that time of year again. Fortunately I don't have to rake, I have a pool...it captures every leaf that falls. : ) Nicely done Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2018 12:24:00 PM

Thank you, Chris! Funny how your pool captures every leaf!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/15/2018 10:56:00 AM

The mighty oak always seems to have a very crunchy carpet in the Fall. Great imagery.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2018 12:23:00 PM

Thanks, M.L.!