Memorial Tree

On a park beside the Murray
on a state park boundary,
amongst red gums and black box
and the silver wattle tree,
there’s a place to go exploring
with a thousand things to see,
on the weekly Thursday ritual
for Gary, Tom, and me.

We’d sit and watch Tom wander,
speak about a boundary tree
that’s significance in history
is for the local aborigine.
There are markers in the river
for the boat fraternity,
and a place with peace and quiet
for Gary, Tom, and me.

But the first call for our Tommy
was to cock his leg and pee,
on a red gum that’s still growing
to leave his message; ‘this is me!’
And before it’s time to leave
it’s back to have another wee.
That red gum on the Murray will,
always be, Tom’s memorial tree.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 2/21/2021 6:05:00 PM
Nice Australian poem.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/23/2021 6:49:00 PM
Hello Robert ... thank you. I'm pleased you enjoyed it Robert - Lindsay
Date: 2/20/2021 4:14:00 PM
A sad tale lindsay, enjoy life because one day it becomes a memory. Tom
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/23/2021 6:47:00 PM
Hello Tom ... and nothing mortal escapes the ravages of time - thanks again Tom - Lindsay
Date: 2/16/2021 2:37:00 PM
This is too cute Lindsay. Hope you, Gary and Tom will have many more visits to this place. God Bless, JB
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/23/2021 6:45:00 PM
Hello Judy ... unfortunately old age caught up with Tom, but he left a legacy for Gary and I - thank you Judy - Lindsay
Date: 2/16/2021 10:51:00 AM
Well-written, descriptive, moving, and entertaining, Lindsay! Janice
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/23/2021 6:43:00 PM
Hello Janice. I appreciate your fine comment. Hope your staying safe - Lindsay
Date: 2/16/2021 7:49:00 AM
Awwww, this is cute and sad at the same time. I miss flying down under. Blessings xxoo
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/23/2021 6:41:00 PM
Hello Connie ... thanks once again Connie. I'd say you are missed down here too Connie - Lindsay
Date: 2/15/2021 3:26:00 PM
Great write, Lindsay. Marking his territory ;)
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/23/2021 6:39:00 PM
Thank you Angela. A dogs way of warning other dogs - Lindsay
Date: 2/15/2021 11:34:00 AM
survival not assured ....Aloha! Rico
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/23/2021 6:37:00 PM
Hello Rico ... outback trees rely on animals to help with the watering. Well, that's my theory - Lindsay
Date: 2/15/2021 5:33:00 AM
Lovely poem, nicely done, but if I ever make it down under... I know what to avoid
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/23/2021 6:35:00 PM
G'day Jerry ... Tom would love you to worship his memorial tree - thank you Jerry - Lindsay
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