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Memorial Day Remembrance

Sitting on the old black oak, where we used to fish together,
lost in the past, I think back, and remember a better day.
You wrote to me about your new ship, and new friends,
and your new Pontiac, with only twenty-two payments left to pay.

The morning's rain left the air heavy, like my heart,
as I coax my line and bobber to and fro. 
I can't find any explanation for this world, 
or reason for why you had to go.

Last watch was nearly over, time to hit the cot,
two exocet missiles hit port-side, 
your stricken ship never fired a shot.

Two days later, from the fantail of the USS Conyngham (DDG-17),
Senior Enlisted CPO, tall and proud, left over from an older Navy,  
turned his head down, and away, with shoulders heaving,
eyes sunken and red, that Chief cried like a little baby.
       
Things didn't turn out quite as we had planned,
I was supposed to be your son's Godfather,
And you were supposed to be my Best Man. 

I pull up my line and tackle, to answer nature's call,
the stream splashed down to meet the river, 
and Marshal Tucker Band played on the truck radio.

I reach into my pocket, and pull out two pieces of metal,
hanging from a faded chain, gleaming, they gently clink.
Name, branch, social, blood type, and religion tell the tale...
thrown now into the river's, deeping, I watch them quickly sink.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Chiri Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 4:14 AM
So many things about this poem that I truly enjoyed but where to begin? How about I just say "an amazing" piece of art at its finest my dear friend!;) thank you Richard for sharing!;)
Theraven Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 8:12 PM
Brenda, Thank you for the wonderful comments. Happy Veteran's Day. -Richard
Chiri Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 4:15 AM
Everyone seen sad is it odd of me to see a beauty in it all?;(
Dawn Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 12:13 AM
So sad. So perfect. I’m in awe.
Theraven Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 12:18 AM
You would understand, if anyone. -Richard
Sands Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 6:21 PM
Wow. this is so sad and well expressed. I love your poems. Well done:)
Theraven Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 9:52 PM
Heidi, Thank you for the comment. It's nice to hear from you. -Richard
Krutsinger Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 3:17 AM
So sad. "Things didn't turn out quite as we had planned, I was supposed to be your son's Godfather, And you were supposed to be my Best Man. " So relate-able, reminding me of people in my life who left shockingly young and suddenly!
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July 5, 2019 at 9:59 PM
Caren, Thanks for your comments. Background: The USS Stark incident occurred during the Iran–Iraq War on 17 May 1987 when an Iraqi jet aircraft fired missiles at the American frigate USS Stark. Thirty-seven United States Navy personnel were killed and 21 were injured. -Richard
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 12:03 AM
Heartfelt words of one whose friend is a natural to have penned such a tribute to be immortalized for future eyes to cherish, Aloha William
Theraven Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 11:21 PM
Thanks to you William, they will never be forgotten. They made mistakes like anyone else. They had hearts broken and broke hearts. I hope God finds forgiveness for us all. -Richard
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