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Sitting on the old black oak, where we used to fish together, lost in the past, I think back, and remember a better day. You wrote to me about your new ship, and new friends, and your new Pontiac, with only twenty-two payments left to pay. The morning's rain left the air heavy, like my heart, as I coax my line and bobber to and fro. I can't find any explanation for this world, or reason for why you had to go. Last watch was nearly over, time to hit the cot, two exocet missiles hit port-side, your stricken ship never fired a shot. Two days later, from the fantail of the USS Conyngham (DDG-17), Senior Enlisted CPO, tall and proud, left over from an older Navy, turned his head down, and away, with shoulders heaving, eyes sunken and red, that Chief cried like a little baby. Things didn't turn out quite as we had planned, I was supposed to be your son's Godfather, And you were supposed to be my Best Man. I pull up my line and tackle, to answer nature's call, the stream splashed down to meet the river, and Marshal Tucker Band played on the truck radio. I reach into my pocket, and pull out two pieces of metal, hanging from a faded chain, gleaming, they gently clink. Name, branch, social, blood type, and religion tell the tale... thrown now into the river's, deeping, I watch them quickly sink.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/28/2019 4:14:00 AM
So many things about this poem that I truly enjoyed but where to begin? How about I just say "an amazing" piece of art at its finest my dear friend!;) thank you Richard for sharing!;)
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Date: 11/11/2019 8:12:00 PM
Brenda, Thank you for the wonderful comments. Happy Veteran's Day. -Richard
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Date: 10/28/2019 4:15:00 AM
Everyone seen sad is it odd of me to see a beauty in it all?;(
Date: 8/18/2019 12:13:00 AM
So sad. So perfect. I’m in awe.
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Date: 8/18/2019 12:18:00 AM
You would understand, if anyone. -Richard
Date: 6/29/2019 6:21:00 PM
Wow. this is so sad and well expressed. I love your poems. Well done:)
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Date: 7/5/2019 9:52:00 PM
Heidi, Thank you for the comment. It's nice to hear from you. -Richard
Date: 6/23/2019 3:17:00 AM
So sad. "Things didn't turn out quite as we had planned, I was supposed to be your son's Godfather, And you were supposed to be my Best Man. " So relate-able, reminding me of people in my life who left shockingly young and suddenly!
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Date: 7/5/2019 9:59:00 PM
Caren, Thanks for your comments. Background: The USS Stark incident occurred during the Iran–Iraq War on 17 May 1987 when an Iraqi jet aircraft fired missiles at the American frigate USS Stark. Thirty-seven United States Navy personnel were killed and 21 were injured. -Richard
Date: 5/30/2019 12:03:00 AM
Heartfelt words of one whose friend is a natural to have penned such a tribute to be immortalized for future eyes to cherish, Aloha William
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Date: 5/30/2019 11:21:00 PM
Thanks to you William, they will never be forgotten. They made mistakes like anyone else. They had hearts broken and broke hearts. I hope God finds forgiveness for us all. -Richard

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