Memorable Moments

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Peeking in the room as they silently slept, my three grandchildren...so precious they looked :)

Little limbs 
Tangled 'twined 
Silently sleeping 
Tiny toddlers
Comfortably cuddled

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/30/2023 7:30:00 PM

So sweet, Charles! A treasure.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/30/2023 10:27:00 AM

Awwn thats so cute of you, and reminds me of my sons toddler days too. It must be a different feeling even better to see your grandchildren. I love the alliterations and the way you’ve delivered this. Wishing your family a blessed 2024

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/30/2023 9:08:00 AM

Awwh, how cute and adorable this poem is and I can truly imagine them sleeping so quietly with soothing comfort.. Gosh, absolutely beautiful this is! Love the lil alliterations here as well.. Beautiful~

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/30/2023 9:05:00 AM

A joy to see Charlie, precious moments. Tom

Silent One

Date: 12/30/2023 6:54:00 AM

aww so lovely and thank you for reading my silly song to them.. appreciate it.