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MEMORABLE BALLET

submitted into Brian Strands 1397 Poetry Contest, July 2025

MEMORABLE BALLET
her thoughts pirouette, twirl, and spin, a choreographed ballet across the blank screen. her words harmonize and blend transforming them into beautiful poetry. her soaring imagination rises and leaps like a grand jeté, the poem takes flight. imagery and rhythm create a melodic verse like well-orchestrated music, her poetry fills the air. meter is the measure that governs the pace, as her passion finds her poetic voice. in a delicate dance of love and creativity like a pas de deux, the words entwine. a crescendo of emotions her heart doth express like a grand finale, the poem reaches its peak. her soul dances wild and free like a memorable ballet is her poetry.
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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 11:41 AM
Hello Sara, I enjoy ballet. My fav. is The Nutcracker. I will make this poem my fav. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 3:02 PM
Hello Sara, I enjoy watching ballet on t.v. I i love The Nut Cracker. I never get tired watching it. Oh how nice. your aunt must have had a big class to teach. Oh, you are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 5:27 PM
I, too, enjoy ballet. I grew up around ballet; my aunt was a prima ballerina who later started her own ballet school. I loved watching her perform and later her students. Thank you for the fav! I greatly appreciate it. hugs, Sara
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 4:12 AM
Creative winning work. Congratulations. Way to go.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 5:49 PM
thank you for your visit, Sara K, and for your congratulatory words, hugs, Sara B
Poet Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 2:24 AM
Fantastic lines, you penned here. Your creativity is just so artistically expressed. Congratulations on your contest win.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 5:48 PM
thank you for stopping by, Sotto. I appreciate your kind and congratulatory words. have a pleasant evening, Sara
George Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 9:58 PM
I feel as if I have watched a beautiful ballet. My soul too is dancing with her. Lovely penning.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 15, 2025 at 4:10 PM
awww, thank you dear Valsa for your visit and kind words. Wishing you a pleasant evening
Edmonds  Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 5:45 PM
That’s poetry in motion Sara, a beautiful write… Beryl
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 15, 2025 at 4:10 PM
I appreciate you and your kind comments. Have a blessed evening, Sara
Baker Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 4:56 PM
Dance girl, dance! A showstopper and FAV in my book. It's amazing how you can use metaphor and imagery to perfect, Sara. I'm truly impressed. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 15, 2025 at 4:11 PM
Thank you, Bill. Your encouragement gives me confidence & I'm grateful.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 2:49 PM
Beautiful!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 4:30 PM
thanks for stopping by!
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