Memoir

decision to sin
heart yen mistaken for love 

pillow teardrop lies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Vionet Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 8:21 PM
LOVE it =]
Parker Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 6:48 PM
Merci, Mademoiselle. :-))
Teagan Avatar
January 17, 2026 at 2:30 PM
This is so good, a strong message in very few words. I love it. Well done, Arlo
Parker Avatar
January 21, 2026 at 12:02 PM
Appreciate you sharing comment and stopping by, BT. :-)
Zahid Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 11:55 AM
Great write
Parker Avatar
January 10, 2026 at 3:11 PM
Thanks for stopping by and the comment, PZ. :-))
Chircop Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 10:56 AM
Sin or love..It's complicated.Intriguing post.Keep them coming.
Parker Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 2:09 PM
simple Love can ruin all sin….thx 4 stopping by, CC. :o)) <><
Nicole Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 5:19 PM
We have the freedom to make the choices we make, whether good or bad. Sin entered the world because of choice. The spiral continues, only worse. Sad, indeed.
Parker Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 10:44 AM
Decisions present themselves every moment. Wise choices lead forward but poor choices can only lead sideways. Learn and move on but forward, not sideways.
Puddifoot Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 3:13 AM
'sin entered the world because of choice' well don't worry cos soon you'll be living in a global dictatorship with zero choice and freedom
Puddifoot Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 11:10 AM
i don't think in terms of 'sin', i think mistakes & experiences, cos i'm not viewing things thru the lens of religion
Parker Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 4:02 PM
Sins have nothing to do with religion. Decisions we make determine our lives. Thx 4 comments.
Carmack Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 2:55 AM
We are fallen indeed. You crafted this one perfectly.
Nicole Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 5:16 PM
Yes, we have. So thankful we can be forgiven.
Parker Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 3:12 AM
Humbled yet happy. Thank you for coming by, RC.
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