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Melting Snow

melting snow reveals tender grass shoots stretching toward the sun morning’s hope dispels yesterday’s troubles 1/2/2022

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/6/2022 5:55:00 AM

After the first late Spring/early Summer shoots that appear my winter mood seems to fade, not that I dislike Winter, but Summer nights are always spent outside in our beautiful garden on our wonderful porch, my Winter skin giving in to warm Summer nights - ahhhhhh so serene! Lovely Tanka my friend, let 2022 be a year of change for the better of all, best wishes and may all your dreams come true. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/6/2022 7:34:00 AM

For me it’s the day after Christmas—-winter hasn’t even begun in earnest and I’m shooing it away! But I’m becoming curmudgeonly about the weather—winter is too cold! Summer too hot! Spring and fall too short! -ps

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/3/2022 8:55:00 PM

Nicely done

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/3/2022 8:56:00 PM

Thank you Kim:) -ps

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/3/2022 11:01:00 AM

I certainly hope so!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/3/2022 12:38:00 PM

Hope springs eternal, as they say! :) ~ps

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/3/2022 6:41:00 AM

I see the tender shoots of hope. Inspiring poem, PS. Apt for the new year.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/3/2022 8:00:00 AM

Thank you Vijay :) -ps

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/3/2022 4:25:00 AM

- When the snow melts in the spring ... winteres troubles disappear ... a beautiful sight :) - Best wishes for the new year, P.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/3/2022 7:59:00 AM

Thank you Sunshine. -ps

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/2/2022 10:18:00 PM

I love to watch the snow melting especially with a lovely sun to pour over me, :)

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/3/2022 7:59:00 AM

Thank you Mystic for your visit and thoughtful comment :) -ps

Valsa George

Date: 1/2/2022 7:39:00 PM

A sign of winter paving way to spring ! Shoots of grass are indeed shoots of life ! Enjoyed this lovely ditty, dear friend !

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/2/2022 8:52:00 PM

O good! I am glad you liked this one! :) -ps

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/2/2022 6:23:00 PM

Yes, indeed! Melt, melt, melt! :) gw

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/2/2022 6:28:00 PM

:D Writing from memory. We rarely get snow here in the South--and rarely is all I want! Last year we had Snowmageddon--awful! Wishing you sunshine and melted snow! ~ps

Anil Deo

Date: 1/2/2022 6:03:00 PM

love-ly. happy NEW YEAR dear poet. shalom, shalom

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/2/2022 6:13:00 PM

Thank you, Anil :) ~ps