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Melting Into You

Come my darling with the nightsky in your hair And the rose buds on your lips With eyes of infinite grace that drowns my sorrows As if eternity had lost my soul in its timeless beauty. In a web of passion I'm entangled by your love By your silent breathing through the helpless night As if the moonlit sea was drifting its sweet waves back to me. Like the dew I melted into your soft kiss It was a sweet death I'd die a thousand times Never to be found again For in your soul I breathe!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/15/2014 1:22:00 AM
passionately sweet lovely gem of love bravo
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Date: 8/9/2013 7:59:00 AM
very lovely poem. Warm thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 6/17/2013 8:30:00 PM
Very beautiful and romantic. Powerful words of endless love :)
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Date: 6/15/2013 6:54:00 AM
Romantic and powerful...you just leave me awed. :)
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Date: 6/15/2013 6:42:00 AM
Romantic and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..I am honored that you would fav my work..Sara
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Date: 6/14/2013 10:10:00 PM
Hello M&M.... lovely and deep.. like dew in a soft kiss... i love that line... xox~ Linda
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Date: 6/14/2013 1:42:00 PM
Ooozing with passion & romance m .....love it !!! :) my friend....cherie.bunny:)
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Date: 6/14/2013 9:26:00 AM
Deadly romantic..! lovely poem you got here, M. *hug*
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 9/20/2013 3:15:00 AM
Thank you Shirley. Your review means much.
Date: 6/14/2013 6:08:00 AM
Oh....the absolute beauty of romance!!!!! Lovely, Mustapha...Sublime! BTW...whenever I'm in class...and I need to make up a sentence to explain some concept...Mustapha if the name I always pick! :)
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 7/26/2013 6:23:00 AM
Thank you Eileen for that wonderful comment my friend and for the chuckles.
Date: 6/14/2013 1:21:00 AM
So romantic Mustapha xx
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/16/2013 3:18:00 PM
Thank you Mandy,I'm glad you enjoyed this one.
Date: 6/14/2013 1:13:00 AM
- Mustapha, this is a beautiful poem !! - Thank you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/16/2013 3:16:00 PM
Thank you Anne,I'm glad you enjoyed this one. ;)
Date: 6/14/2013 12:10:00 AM
I think this is one of your prettiest ones I have ever seen. A fave for this!
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/15/2013 8:24:00 AM
A fave is big plus coming from you.xoxo
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/15/2013 8:22:00 AM
Thank you Andrea for your lovely comment.
Date: 6/13/2013 6:44:00 PM
This is too breathtaking and beautiful for words !!!!!!!!!!:)
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/15/2013 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Carrie for your lovely comment,have a great weekend. :)

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