Melting Into You

Come my darling with the nightsky
in your hair
And the rose buds on your lips
With eyes of infinite grace that
drowns my sorrows
As if eternity had lost my soul in its 
timeless beauty.

In a web of passion I'm entangled
by your love
By your silent breathing through
the helpless night
As if the moonlit sea was drifting
its sweet waves back to me.

Like the dew I melted into your
soft kiss
It was a sweet death I'd die
a thousand times
Never to be found again
For in your soul I breathe!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Yassin Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 1:22 AM
passionately sweet lovely gem of love bravo
Mason Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 7:59 AM
very lovely poem. Warm thoughts, Ralph
Anglesey Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 8:30 PM
Very beautiful and romantic. Powerful words of endless love :)
Wilderson Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 6:54 AM
Romantic and powerful...you just leave me awed. :)
Kendrick Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 6:42 AM
Romantic and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..I am honored that you would fav my work..Sara
A   Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 10:10 PM
Hello M&M.... lovely and deep.. like dew in a soft kiss... i love that line... xox~ Linda
Thomas Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 1:42 PM
Ooozing with passion & romance m .....love it !!! :) my friend....cherie.bunny:)
Candy Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 9:26 AM
Deadly romantic..! lovely poem you got here, M. *hug*
Mohammed Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 3:15 AM
Thank you Shirley. Your review means much.
Manassian Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 6:08 AM
Oh....the absolute beauty of romance!!!!! Lovely, Mustapha...Sublime! BTW...whenever I'm in class...and I need to make up a sentence to explain some concept...Mustapha if the name I always pick! :)
Mohammed Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 6:23 AM
Thank you Eileen for that wonderful comment my friend and for the chuckles.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 1:21 AM
So romantic Mustapha xx
Mohammed Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 3:18 PM
Thank you Mandy,I'm glad you enjoyed this one.
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 1:13 AM
- Mustapha, this is a beautiful poem !! - Thank you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Mohammed Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 3:16 PM
Thank you Anne,I'm glad you enjoyed this one. ;)
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 12:10 AM
I think this is one of your prettiest ones I have ever seen. A fave for this!
Mohammed Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 8:24 AM
A fave is big plus coming from you.xoxo
Mohammed Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 8:22 AM
Thank you Andrea for your lovely comment.
Richards Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 6:44 PM
This is too breathtaking and beautiful for words !!!!!!!!!!:)
Mohammed Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 8:14 AM
Thanks Carrie for your lovely comment,have a great weekend. :)
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