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Melting Away

rainbow reflections fall through the green canopy the white forest floor lit by prisms from above spring sun shines on winter's snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/13/2012 12:24:00 AM
At this lattitude, scenery as you have described it here does not exist in August. Just reading this made me feel cooler from the summer's heat.
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Francine Roberts
Date: 8/13/2012 10:32:00 AM
well it doesn't exist here in August either
Date: 5/22/2012 8:03:00 PM
Francine, the colorful image you described was gorgeous. A special congrats for your win! :) Appreciate your comments on my poetry too. Thanks gal! Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 5/21/2012 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's "Forest Lights" contest Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/20/2012 3:45:00 PM
this is just lovely! congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/20/2012 2:54:00 AM
melting later water flows, in later summer might, yes a sweet delight, the sweet Francine i know....
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Date: 5/19/2012 9:56:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Francine! I love how you described the light falling. It sounds magical. Blessings and love, Rhonda
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Date: 5/19/2012 8:54:00 PM
Francine ,such an inviting image that beckons read me! Congrats on a well deserved win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/19/2012 6:17:00 PM
Very nice Francine. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/19/2012 3:53:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/19/2012 12:30:00 PM
Francine congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/19/2012 10:32:00 AM
Francine, Alexa and I both enjoyed the awesome imagery in your poem. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/15/2012 10:00:00 AM
Exquisite imagery Francine; I love rainbows, they don't come often enough so you have given me one in this lovely verse. Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 5/13/2012 2:13:00 PM
Francine teriffic imagery, love it..David
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Date: 5/13/2012 10:44:00 AM
wow, yours is truly beautiful, Francine.
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