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Francine Roberts

Melting Away

rainbow reflections

   fall through the green canopy

       the white forest floor

               lit by prisms from above

   spring sun shines on winter's snow

Copyright © Francine Roberts | Year Posted 2012

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August 13, 2012 at 12:24 AM

At this lattitude, scenery as you have described it here does not exist in August. Just reading this made me feel cooler from the summer's heat.

Francine Roberts

August 13, 2012 at 10:32 AM

well it doesn't exist here in August either

May 22, 2012 at 8:03 PM

Francine, the colorful image you described was gorgeous. A special congrats for your win! :) Appreciate your comments on my poetry too. Thanks gal! Love, Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 21, 2012 at 7:34 AM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's "Forest Lights" contest Francine. Love, Carol

May 20, 2012 at 3:45 PM

this is just lovely! congrats on your win!

May 20, 2012 at 2:54 AM

melting later water flows, in later summer might, yes a sweet delight, the sweet Francine i know....

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

May 19, 2012 at 9:56 PM

Congrats on your win, Francine! I love how you described the light falling. It sounds magical. Blessings and love, Rhonda

May 19, 2012 at 8:54 PM

Francine ,such an inviting image that beckons read me! Congrats on a well deserved win. Agape, Moses

May 19, 2012 at 6:17 PM

Very nice Francine. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

May 19, 2012 at 3:53 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

May 19, 2012 at 12:30 PM

Francine congrats on your win..David

Carolyn Devonshire

May 19, 2012 at 10:32 AM

Francine, Alexa and I both enjoyed the awesome imagery in your poem. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Elizabeth Wesley

May 15, 2012 at 10:00 AM

Exquisite imagery Francine; I love rainbows, they don't come often enough so you have given me one in this lovely verse. Luv, Lizzie

May 13, 2012 at 2:13 PM

Francine teriffic imagery, love it..David

Andrea Dietrich

May 13, 2012 at 10:44 AM

wow, yours is truly beautiful, Francine.

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