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Melt With Me Against a Toxic Sunset of Lust

melt with me against a toxic sunset of lust light the burning candles illuminate the red hot metal lanterns dive naked into my arms raw take of my flesh as i take of yours lose ourselves one in the other devour the creamy liquid of my origin and i the nectar from your petal wrap yourself in the flag of me i too will fly your colors let us wage a war of sex on one another and leave no border uncrossed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chakrabarty Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 10:02 AM
devour the creamy liquid of my origin and i the nectar from your petal. Marvelous use of words.( origin, petal) I have enjoyed it to the fullest and added it to my fav list. Thank you Maurice.....RAJAT
Nance Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 8:28 AM
Sexy good. :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 1:08 AM
wow, I agree with Jan. STEAMY. I LOVE how you write, and to think you don't even consider yourself a poet. Come ON, man!!!
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 12:27 PM
steamy and passionate Maurice and i agree with lovely James about the title:-) Hugs Jan x
Yvonne Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 12:45 PM
thank you Jan.
Fraser Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 11:58 AM
Love the title, and the poetry to follow is sensually steamy, and that's HOT!! - way to go Maurice, James :)
Yvonne Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 12:44 PM
thanks James.
Smith Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 8:31 AM
Powerful and sensual Maurice...I thought it was all about the flower until the end lines....have an fantastic day :)
Yvonne Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 12:43 PM
right back at you.
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