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Melt This Cold-Cold Heart

Start softly and build... Build 'til this frozen heart melts And breaks so gentle... ("Serenade for Strings" Pt. III: Tchaikovsky)

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Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 11:52:00 PM

Wonderful serenade

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/11/2009 6:49:00 PM

I could hear this one playing, Tim, such lovely lilting words ... love is wonderful when its ON ... not so wonderful when its OFF... I have had the best and worst of both kinds.. on hiatus right now.. with love ... your poem gives me smiles and offers hope.. I am sure u do not have a cold cold heart.. u write too well... it has to be warm.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/11/2009 8:06:00 AM

Yep....it can melt my heart...turn it into a puddle!! Lovely! The choices you seem to pick, are some of my very favorites !!!!ps....thanks for another chance to listen to Samuel Barber's Adagio....I truly llllllloooove that piece!! :) ~ Carrie

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/11/2009 12:40:00 AM

I cant figure out who your talking about..but I sure love this senryu..great work. The last line is perfect. BG

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/11/2009 12:39:00 AM

I cant figure out who your talking about..but I sure love this senryu..great work. The last line is perfect. BG

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/10/2009 9:08:00 PM

Beautiful write--Charma