Nette Onclaud Poet Ottava rima

Melody of Yoga

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i climb inside my breath meeting purple light
bow of  spine humming a gently- kissed timber,
toes, fingers stray along lyres of inner flight
on rippled hushes wading softly, chants glimmer;
even rain’s tunes outside succumb to soul’s night,
tempo of diaphragm lilts, whispers flutter
god of peace chimes,  ascending inwardly
beaming with glow, i meet heaven's symphony


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Carol Sunshine Brown March 27, 2012 at 5:37 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's contest Nette. Love, Carol

Debra Squyres March 26, 2012 at 7:50 AM This is so lovely...reminds me of the "sighhhhhh" moments when listening to a lovely melody or observing a lovely scenery !! Love it !! Congrats on your win in the contest...I'm below you in the list as well..woo hooo !!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 26, 2012 at 3:27 AM Congrats on your win, Nette, with this beautifully written poem. I am feeling relaxed just reading it. Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown April 26, 2011 at 10:37 AM Congratulations on your win in the Dr. Ram's contest Nette. Love, Carol

Dr Hitendra Mehta April 22, 2011 at 10:40 AM Many congrats Nette on well desrved big win in Dr Rams contest with this creative piece. Happy easter. - Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Jack Horne April 22, 2011 at 4:26 AM Many congratulations and a very happy Easter to you : )

Gautami Phookan April 22, 2011 at 12:59 AM Heartiest Congratulations nette on this wonderful win.Love,Gautami

Andrea Dietrich April 21, 2011 at 11:13 PM This is a flood of melodic imagery pouring out of you, Nette. congrats on your win. Glad I got to finally see your entry tonight.

Tahera Mannan April 21, 2011 at 9:36 PM A beautiful meditative symphony you've created Nette. Super congrats to you for this win.

Gwendolen Song April 21, 2011 at 5:43 PM The beginning of this poem is very gripping...it pulls the reader right in! Congrats on your HM-I hope u have a blessed Easter weekend, Nette! High 5! Gwendolen

Ralph Taylor April 21, 2011 at 5:19 PM Congrats on your win, Nette. Excellent piece. Nice going. Happy Easter. xxxRalph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 21, 2011 at 5:11 PM YEAH!!! Nette dear friend ..congrats..this one did not disappear ..so happy u are reaping the rewards of your artistic gift of writing luv.. an electric and energized entry ..enjoy another sweet success with luv..luv..

John Freeman April 21, 2011 at 4:01 PM Way to go Nette, Congratulations on your success in the winner circle. Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick April 21, 2011 at 3:25 PM Very lovely poem that breathes serenity like music itself, Nette. Congratulations on your fine 5th Place win in Dr. Ram's contest. Happy Easter! Love, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta April 21, 2011 at 2:37 PM Congratulations on the sixth place win in my contest, nette

Kash Poet April 17, 2011 at 9:27 PM Enjoyed very much this inner flight,Nette.--best wishes--kashinath

James Foulk April 17, 2011 at 9:06 PM a great piece of work, enjoyed reading it.

Michelle Mac Donald April 17, 2011 at 4:10 PM An inspirational piece, Nette! This a place where we may bow to the supreme reality within ourselves. So odd, since two days I'd been trying to figure out where I'd heard a muscial chant. Only now, after reading your verse have I figured it out. Thank you! Good luck with this inspirational write...best to you and yours, Mikki

Audrey Haick April 17, 2011 at 1:26 PM Well-written poem for the contest, Nette. Best wishes for the Winners' List with this beauty. Have a great week! Love, Annalise

Jack Horne April 17, 2011 at 12:49 PM Beautiful words, Nette - a sure winner : )

Dr.Ram Mehta April 17, 2011 at 12:24 PM Thanks for the entry. I wish this time your poem does not get ghost's wings, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 17, 2011 at 11:37 AM Feeling quite elevated Nette dear from these remarkable words .. superb form and wonderful melodious lines,,good luck in the contest luv... still trouble on the contest front.. waiting ..waiting... my Blast Off is not for any contest luv.. just my own expressions for hubby dearest..haha..luv that man..of mine..

James Fraser April 17, 2011 at 11:31 AM Beautiful and lovely Nette. I hope this gem reaches the heights of which it deserves, good luck in Dr. Rams contest....:)

Wilma Neels April 17, 2011 at 10:45 AM An awesome write Nette, Carolyn highlighted my favorite line.. Hope your weekend's been a good one.. All the best for Dr. Ram's contest ;) *hugs* W

Carolyn Devonshire April 17, 2011 at 10:19 AM Magnificent, Nette! So many beautiful lines and my favorite is "lyres of inner flight." Wishing you great success in Dr. Ram's contest, dear. I'm out of town fishing until after Easter -- returning home May 4. Have an EKG May 5. Have a wonderful Easter, my friend! Love, Carolyn