Melody Lane

                         Melody Lane
                            Andante Way
                         Minuet Pass                  
                            Crescendo Trail

                          Violins strain
                            Trumpets blare
                          Drums boom
                            Cymbals~ silent

                          The Mountain goes blank
                             Look up, say Thanks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 8:17 AM
Crescendo breaks with silent cymbals! Fave!
Wolf Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 8:08 PM
Real 'cymbalism' here. ~ Efrem Zimbalist, Jr.
Jones Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 11:23 PM
Enjoyed!
Wolf Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 8:08 PM
Tks, KJ. ~ gw
Croft Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 9:31 AM
Very rhythmic, I like! Have a great day Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 7:05 PM
I'd say it likes you too, Karen. Thanks, Gershon
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