Melody

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Writing Challenge - M words (Constance La France)

July 21, 2023

"dreaming is the melody of our life" by Poet it's never too late to pursue your dream… age is just a number of years to count, hums melody a meandering stream... obstacles in our quest we must surmount! a little dainty girl played house with dolls, with dreams in her eyes, with hope in her heart, she had no clue how life changes and falls, she looked forward to a journey to start! humming song of a tinkling rivulet, breathtaking views of a Nature serene... inspired imagination recollect, enthralled senses, surrounding charming scene! dreaming is the melody of our life, Harmony, peace, tranquility, no strife! FIRST PLACE

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/24/2023 11:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Melody" is a wonderful story/write. Love your ending. Where can I find them??? Have a great day with your win......................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/23/2023 9:37:00 PM

"age is just a number of years to count" - the entire poem is beautiful. Congratulations!

Valsa George

Date: 7/23/2023 7:12:00 PM

Yes, dreams make life beautiful. Those who dream and pursue that dream fervently will be facing life with a smile and a sweet melody will be always ringing in their ears. Beautiful poem. Congratulations Mala on your top win!