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Melodies of the Heart

It’s so awesome the way you make me feel. We promise to love in sickness and health though we fall short in abundance of wealth; my ardent heart skips a beat for you still. I bat my brown eyes; you love my high heels. I am the prettiest girl of your dreams. I capture your love all at once it seems, my ardent heart skips a beat for you still. Our love is true, genuine and so real. There is no one else for you other than me. Remember our hearts carved on that old tree? My ardent heart skips a beat for you still. It’s so awesome the way you make me feel; my ardent heart skips a beat for you still. SONNET FORM #4 Echo Sonnet

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Date: 3/25/2016 11:25:00 PM
Danetta Barney, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/23/2016 12:15:00 PM
Simply beautiful! Effective repetitions and otherwise gorgeous language and imagery... BRAVO Danetta! Best wishes, Keith
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Danetta Barney
Date: 2/23/2016 12:19:00 PM
Thanks Keith.
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Danetta Barney
Date: 2/23/2016 12:18:00 PM
Thank you Keith.
Date: 2/20/2016 5:59:00 PM
I see you did very well on this one too my friend. You are very strong in sonnets my friend.A7
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/22/2016 9:47:00 AM
YES, RISK HAS ITS REWARDS MY FRIEND. Not only can you write them but you do so in a most excellent style!
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Danetta Barney
Date: 2/20/2016 9:01:00 PM
Thanks Robert. If it had not been for Debbie's challenge I would not have known I could write them.

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