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Mellow Autumn

Autumns rich mellow flavoured air Unmasked, the trees are now bare. Seldom do we hear the birds sing When the Autumn leaves are falling. Smoke trails from the burning leaves Carried on the light cool breeze. The scent of spiced apple days In the suns golden haze. The Pine towering heavenly high Dropping fragrances on passers by. Smell the crisp refreshing air Wind is blowing everywhere. The leaves they scatter without sound Gently cascading to the ground.. Hazel Connelly 23/10/12 Up In The Autumn Air Russell Sivey's contest

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Date: 11/6/2012 12:58:00 PM
Great work penned that graces the winners' list..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Hazel Connelly
Date: 11/6/2012 2:23:00 PM
Thank you Sara.. :-)
Date: 11/5/2012 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Hazel. Love, Carol
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Hazel Connelly
Date: 11/5/2012 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Carol. :-)
Date: 11/4/2012 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Hazel xx
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Hazel Connelly
Date: 11/4/2012 4:25:00 PM
Thank you Mandy. :-)
Date: 11/3/2012 10:24:00 PM
CONGRATS HAZEL ON A LOVELY WRITE AND WIN WITH GORGEOUS IMAGERY LUV.
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Hazel Connelly
Date: 11/4/2012 4:26:00 PM
Thank you Linda Marie . :-)
Date: 11/3/2012 9:45:00 PM
very nicely done. Congratulations on your win.
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Hazel Connelly
Date: 11/4/2012 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. :-)
Date: 11/3/2012 8:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Hazel Connelly
Date: 11/4/2012 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Joan . :-)
Date: 11/3/2012 7:24:00 PM
congratulations on your lovely poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Hazel Connelly
Date: 11/4/2012 4:28:00 PM
Thank you Joyce.:-)
Date: 10/28/2012 9:13:00 AM
Sweet...flavorful...nice! Hazel! Thanks for visiting! Jimbo
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Hazel Connelly
Date: 10/28/2012 10:26:00 AM
Thanks James. :-) Hazel
Date: 10/24/2012 11:53:00 AM
Visiting your poem today Hazel - it was enjoyable to read it - a poem that I liked very much - thank you for sharing it with me. - Luck in contest !!!! Have a nice day. - / / oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
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Hazel Connelly
Date: 10/24/2012 12:41:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise.. :-)
Date: 10/23/2012 2:06:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Hazel. Love, Carol
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Hazel Connelly
Date: 10/23/2012 3:22:00 PM
Thank you Carol. :-)
Date: 10/23/2012 9:57:00 AM
Very colorful, descriptive and lovely.
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Hazel Connelly
Date: 10/23/2012 9:59:00 AM
Thank you Vesna. :-)

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