Hazel Connelly Poet Couplet

Mellow Autumn

Autumns rich mellow flavoured air
Unmasked,  the trees are now bare.

Seldom do we hear the birds sing
When the Autumn leaves are falling.

Smoke trails from the burning leaves
Carried on the light cool breeze.

The scent of spiced apple days
In the suns golden haze.

The Pine towering heavenly high
Dropping fragrances on passers by.

Smell the crisp refreshing air
Wind is blowing everywhere.

The leaves they scatter without sound
Gently cascading to the ground..


Hazel Connelly  23/10/12
Up In The Autumn Air 
Russell Sivey's contest

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Sara Kendrick November 6, 2012 at 12:58 PM Great work penned that graces the winners' list..Congrats on your win..Sara Hazel Connelly November 6, 2012 at 2:23 PM Thank you Sara.. :-)

Carol Sunshine Brown November 5, 2012 at 7:24 AM Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Hazel. Love, Carol Hazel Connelly November 5, 2012 at 8:26 AM Thank you Carol. :-)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 4, 2012 at 3:36 AM Congratulations on your win Hazel xx Hazel Connelly November 4, 2012 at 4:25 PM Thank you Mandy. :-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 3, 2012 at 10:24 PM CONGRATS HAZEL ON A LOVELY WRITE AND WIN WITH GORGEOUS IMAGERY LUV. Hazel Connelly November 4, 2012 at 4:26 PM Thank you Linda Marie . :-)

Andrea Dietrich November 3, 2012 at 9:45 PM very nicely done. Congratulations on your win. Hazel Connelly November 4, 2012 at 4:27 PM Thank you Andrea. :-)

Joann Grisetti November 3, 2012 at 8:17 PM Congratulations on your win. Hazel Connelly November 4, 2012 at 4:27 PM Thank you Joan . :-)

Joyce Johnson November 3, 2012 at 7:24 PM congratulations on your lovely poem and win. Love, Joyce Hazel Connelly November 4, 2012 at 4:28 PM Thank you Joyce.:-)

James Marshall Goff October 28, 2012 at 9:13 AM Sweet...flavorful...nice! Hazel! Thanks for visiting! Jimbo Hazel Connelly October 28, 2012 at 10:26 AM Thanks James. :-) Hazel

Anne-Lise Andresen October 24, 2012 at 11:53 AM Visiting your poem today Hazel - it was enjoyable to read it - a poem that I liked very much - thank you for sharing it with me. - Luck in contest !!!! Have a nice day. - / / oxox love from Anne-Lise :) Hazel Connelly October 24, 2012 at 12:41 PM Thank you Anne Lise.. :-)

Carol Sunshine Brown October 23, 2012 at 2:06 PM I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Hazel. Love, Carol Hazel Connelly October 23, 2012 at 3:22 PM Thank you Carol. :-)

Vesna Kovrlija October 23, 2012 at 9:57 AM Very colorful, descriptive and lovely. Hazel Connelly October 23, 2012 at 9:59 AM Thank you Vesna. :-)