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Mellow Autumn

mellow autumn golden fields of maize ripple 'neath a sapphire sky ~ summer heartbeat slows dry yellow cornstalks rustle in with autumn song ~ frost adorns morning fields of sunflowers reflect the mellow sunlight ~ orange leaves samba harvest bounty waltz with sweet pears and saffron quince ~ tawny acorn fall amber harvest moon wears the pumpkins carrot blush ~ autumn fire crackles autumn wears a gown graced with soft harvest garlands ~ butterflies fly south 9-23-22 syllables checked with www.howmanysyllables

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 10/17/2022 3:34:00 PM

Such a comprehensive yet poetically evocative poem on autumn, Sam. I especially like the harvest moon that "wears the pumpkins carrot blush" - superb personification. Be well. Brian

Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/7/2022 2:40:00 AM

Good Morning Sam. Autumn is my favorite season for all obvious reasons of her color and flair even when she is soft and quiet. Your entry and words are very much poetic and the format is in wonderful form along with its voice and tone. Thank you for sharing.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/6/2022 12:39:00 PM

I am in wonder about the artistic quality of the poems you're crafting. You give me the sense that we are a natural part of the environment. Thank you for sharing this, Sam! You are such a born performer! And thank you so much for your comments

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/26/2022 12:51:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great autumn poem, Sam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/28/2022 10:15:00 AM

Anne-Lise, thank you from the bottom of my heart. Your lovely message is a treat and an autumn gift that is so appreciated. I'm so glad to see you back on the soup. Missed you. How is your project coming? Think of you often. Sending you a cornucopia of blessings and a hug!

Valsa George

Date: 9/25/2022 9:23:00 PM

"amber harvest moon wears the pumpkins carrot blush ~ autumn fire crackles"..... Love all the ones in this series, espcially the one quoted above. Congratulations Sam on your win !

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/28/2022 10:12:00 AM

Hi Valsa! A heartfelt thank you! You certainly raised my spirits with your lovely feedback! Always such a gift especially from you as you write amazing images in wonderful word pictures. Autumn is such an amazing source of word pictures. It was fun to sit back and imagine! Take care dear friend! Sending you all the blessings of the season.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/25/2022 8:41:00 PM

"pumpkins carrot blush" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/28/2022 10:07:00 AM

A heartfelt thank you Chris. Creating imagery for haiku and for autumn is such a fun task - so many opportunities! Sending you all the blessings of the season!

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 9/25/2022 5:11:00 PM

Beautiful! This is a fave for me as well :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/28/2022 10:05:00 AM

Hi BJ. I feel so honored by your fav. What a gift and a blessing. Thank you for that. So happy you enjoyed this excursion into this amazing season! Sending you all the blessings of the season and my heartfelt gratitude.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/23/2022 6:37:00 PM

Fav! Hope this is a POTD! I admire your poetic sculptures, so very much. You make me feel one with nature. And I so.. Thank you Sam! What a natural you are! Poet and poem are one! Hugs, California Pangie xx

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/28/2022 10:03:00 AM

Hi Pangie! A POTD for this poem would be a wonderful surprise. Thank you for your positive thoughts and for your inspiring message. I am honored - "poet and poem are one." What a lovely thought. I am so glad this poem put you in the middle of this amazing season called autumn. So grateful for your fav - made my day. Hope you are well. It must be beautiful in the wine country these days. Blessings! Hugs my friend!