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Mellifluous - First Place Contest Winner

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In a world of mellifluous dreams, Where whispers embrace in soft moonbeams, A moiety of verses, murmuring in rhyme, Revealing the secrets of an arcane time Nemesis, the muse, with susurrous breath, Weaving tales of love and death, Her voice, a sigh, a melancholy strain, As she plucks the strings with a gentle domain. Ensnared in the web of her melodic spell, Lost in the music, where emotions dwell. Strumming the chords of passion and desire, Her ariose melodies set hearts afire. Maundering through realms of imagination She paints landscapes of exotic charm. Guiding listeners through a mystical visitation. Where dreams acquire a form. In her lulls, the world finds peace. As the lilting notes caress and increase. A symphony of emotions, a dance of hearts, Her music is a balm that heals and imparts With every strum, she ignites a fire. These passions burn and inspire. Her melodies are such whispers in the night. Illuminate the darkness, bringing forth light. In this realm of mellifluous dreams, She weaves a tapestry of enchanting themes. Her voice, a vessel of emotions soaring high, Transcending boundaries and reaching the sky. Her music, a language that knows no bounds, Connecting souls and making hearts resound. In the realm of mellifluous dreams, Where secrets unravel and hope redeems, Her melodies, such whispers in the breeze, Bestow solace and joy, putting minds at ease. In the realm of mellifluous dreams, She helms supreme, and the muse schemes
1st place contest winner

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Date: 7/24/2023 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great day with your win......................
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Date: 7/23/2023 9:36:00 PM
"She helms supreme"- Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/21/2023 5:44:00 AM
Very pleasant sentiments, Lasaad. Enjoyed the delightful voice of your poem.
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Date: 7/21/2023 2:44:00 AM
A sweet as apple cider on a hot day as smooth as honey straight from the hive. Your poem dear friend is superb. The softness of your words relaxes, and there is nothing short of divine in the essence of mellifluous dreams.
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Date: 7/20/2023 5:55:00 PM
Your vocabulary is endless.
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Date: 7/20/2023 4:16:00 PM
Your eloquent poetry conjures up such fantastic images with every line ... Simply bedazzling!
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Date: 7/20/2023 2:26:00 PM
Your poem, "Mellifluous" put me in a very mellifluous mood, Lasaad. Thank you for sharing your poetic gift with us, my dear friend. The picture and music was a big plus to my experience. Have a mellifluous week, Bill
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Date: 7/20/2023 1:33:00 PM
One Word “Beautiful” Lasaad! Debx
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Date: 7/20/2023 1:03:00 PM
- This is truly a symphony of emotions ... beautiful, Las ... Beethoven comes in the shadow of this poem :) - hugs
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