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Melancholy Faun

Wooden paths I seek forlorn, I miss the smell where I was born. The coolest air of blossoms bloom no longer wait for me to loom. No canopy to be my roof ~ now ashes scattered under hoof. I had to leave I couldn't stay, they took upon themselves that day: destroying what I miss the most ~ My home, now just a charcoal ghost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/7/2011 9:53:00 AM
This is beautifully written. Nice job :)
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Date: 3/7/2011 9:41:00 AM
I can really relate to the feelings in this. great job!
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Date: 3/7/2011 9:09:00 AM
Congrats on becoming only the second poem I've added to "Fav." Loved it. ~Prince.
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