Melancholic Motes

Drawn to his whistling we’d skip along that path,
Locked onto the shed’s old wireless; tinny and taught with his tune,
Dust waiting for our arrival by the door, yet 
Now you wouldn’t even know it was there.
The path, long ago an entry point of dreams, no longer leads, but
Follows memories gathering dust with neglect now 
Overgrown with the passage of time.

As children we would follow that path
Holding our pop’s crooked hand, a sticky bun in the other 
Trying to count the countless bricks, to the end
To the start of grandpa’s ole wooden shed, the door ajar, 
Allowing memories; old and new, to come and go as they please.
For amongst the wooden toys and tools and junk that clung to shelves,
Amidst the scent of thinners and birch shavings and oldness
There lived here once in our childhood – these happier simpler times.

Now I stand near the end of adulthood, peering in the window
My reflection recoiling at its image, flinching at the emptiness, the
Dusty hollowness that hangs there, - though 
I imagine the laughter, and see our useful little hands
Hammering in time with the wireless, our
Hair and clothes powdered with the dust
Gathered on the filaments of tales past and present.

Those memories now lay in the dust, like
Echoes clinging to a voice, all
The shelves so full of everything, yet they are nothing now
-	Gathering dust
Like his stories; buried amongst the particles, that
I now tread upon softly, not wanting the moment to dissolve
Into melancholic motes, as I close my eyes in search of a child,
Hidden in the dusty recesses of my mind.




John Lawless’s poetry contest – ‘Gathering Dust’
28 Feb. 15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 6:42 PM
Mark, Congratulations on your old favorite poem. Always ~LINDA~
Lamoureux Avatar
June 28, 2015 at 9:36 AM
I enjoyed this nostalgic gem, congrats!
A  Avatar
June 28, 2015 at 12:45 AM
Mark, Congrats on your win......Love SKAT
Hamilton Avatar
June 27, 2015 at 3:54 AM
it will never die Mark it is forever in your precious memories beloved and cherished Congrats on placing hugs
Ngoma Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 1:46 AM
Hi Mark...this brings to memory my own childhood, especially on how one was seen as wierd..and I look at my own children and how I so wish I was more like them, but how I wish they would grow up with that motes and never loose that spark as I fear I have...rgds, 7habang
Makama Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 9:32 AM
great lines, wonderful expressions. What better way for this message to flow?
Trichet Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 5:21 PM
Hey thanks Funom! Im glad this had some meaning for you...I had fun writing it
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:25 PM
oh my gosh, not ONE comment on this fantastic writing??? Did you not even get an HM??? I would have ranked this one in top three!!! OMG. I love this.
Trichet Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 10:32 PM
Cheers Andrea - you're so kind taking the time to comment on my words. Thanks again for stopping by.
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