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Meg and the Sun

The sun got tangled
in the branches of an old Hawthorne.

Daybreak hung down
in grey strips, like a torn parachute
among the knuckled finger-bones
of the grasping tree.

Meg, the younger sister of Bill,
wanted to shin-up and dislodge it.
we thought there was a good chance
we boys would catch a glimpse
of her knickers, so we agreed 
to give her a leg-up. 

Her skinny limbs, skirt hiked up,
snaking through the spiky twigs
until she was about half-way
to the sun.
Black branches shook
and thorns rattled,
then they loosened their grip
and the sun rose.

Meg whooped and almost fell.
We others grinned sheepishly;

Bill looked at us
as if we were all crazy.

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Date: 6/14/2022 7:59:00 PM
Nice coming of age poem, unless it was last weekend, lol
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