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Meeting With a Mermaid

The mermaid swimming in the sea was scowling when she spotted me - quite ghastly with her seaweed hair, she wasn't rattled by my stare, and hauled herself on board my boat (despite her weight, we stayed afloat). Her scaly tail and fishy smell convinced me that this gal was Hell, and then she shoved me overboard. My shouts and splashes quite ignored, she cackled loudly, yelled, 'Whoopee' and left me stranded in the sea... for Line's Mermaid contest

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Date: 10/10/2019 1:03:00 AM
Hi Jack, this is very different - love how the mermaid was not beautiful and sexy this time, a creative well crafted poem. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Congratulations on a top win.
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Date: 10/1/2019 3:53:00 PM
What a great chuckle I had with the reading of your poem. congrats on your top placement.
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Date: 9/30/2019 9:21:00 PM
So, Jack, I guess it’s true—a delightful fishy gal once interbred with a great white: a thought I had never before contemplated. Wonderful write, my friend.
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Date: 9/29/2019 7:48:00 AM
I had a different impression of mermaids, Jack! At least you lived to tell the tale, my friend:) Pleasantly enjoyable. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/27/2019 8:37:00 PM
Ha. I alway enjoy your poems so much , Jack!
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Date: 9/27/2019 6:42:00 PM
Cute one. Reads like winners' list to me. Thanks for all the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 9/27/2019 2:33:00 PM
Oh, this is hilarious, Jack. I'm sure you have a winner here! Enjoyed. Love, carolyn
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Date: 9/27/2019 12:13:00 PM
What fun! love this line--(despite her weight, we stayed afloat)
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Date: 9/27/2019 11:28:00 AM
Well - THAT was unexpected! You have certainly put your unique stamp on this theme and I loved the story which unfolded with such great rhythm and rhyme!
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Date: 9/27/2019 10:38:00 AM
ooh what a mischievous mermaid indeed lol:-) hugs jan xx
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