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random whimsical thoughts

Meeting of Minds

A dance to hidden music
with a handsome fellow
who seems to sense my mood
he holds me close as we whirl 

Then leading me to scented gardens
he points out the heavenly stars
telling me stories of each one
how they came to be in Dream Time

He romances me with his wondrous stories
telling of mystic places far, far away
all the time holding my hand tenderly
we stroll through the scented gardens

A feeling of peace and paradise fill me
so close I feel to him, love in my soul
this tender meeting of two separate minds
takes me far away to Nirvana in his arms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Roper Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Wonderful write congratulations on your win. Hugs eve
Hamilton Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 7:34 PM
ty Eve hugs
A   Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 2:30 PM
Shadow, Congrats on your win. Always ~LINDA~
Hamilton Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 7:34 PM
ty Linda hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 9:13 AM
I enjoyed your winning poem! Congrats Shadow!
Hamilton Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 7:33 PM
ty Rick hugs
A. Sharma Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 4:11 AM
Beauty of ur passionate pen mesmerises Shadow!Congrats on big win!
Hamilton Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 7:32 PM
ty Dr Upma hugs
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July 6, 2015 at 9:49 PM
Congratulations, dear Shadow, on this beautiful win! It's a solid 7 for this heart melting romantic piece! BRAVO! Pandita
Hamilton Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 7:31 PM
ty Pandita it is in my book too hugs
A  Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 9:33 PM
the ending was the melt of it all Shadow, :) Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest. Love **SKAT**
Hamilton Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 7:30 PM
ty Skat for hosting and for my place hugs
Lata Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 3:15 PM
Reminds me of someone, thanks
Hamilton Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 5:16 AM
ty Anamika hugs
Tacito Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 7:23 AM
This was very touching. It's nice when two hearts are in a deeper unison.
Hamilton Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 8:00 AM
ty Drake you are a romantic man ty for taking time to read Shadow
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June 2, 2013 at 7:18 AM
- Beautiful .... Imagine if we could dance all day like this ..... - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 8:02 AM
Anne ty so much most appreciated Shadow
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