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Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud ~ SNAPSHOTS OF A NIGHT SCENE Poetry Contest. ~ Date Written:5/17/2026 ~  4. Meeting In The Dark

Meeting In The Dark

Meeting in the dark, away from prying eyes. Away from wagging tongues, spewing evil venom like a snake. Our love must go on, for we are soul mates. The lights look like diamonds, your diamond eyes match. Somehow this view left me, totally speechless.
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Anaya Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 9:14 PM
Congratulations Paula! Cadlentine affair. Whew
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 11:39 AM
Big congrats, Paula
Goldsmith Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 8:41 AM
"4 Place" ~ "Meeting In The Dark." ~Date Written :5/17/2026 ~ Written By Human Poet...............
Daniel Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 5:58 AM
Exceptional writing, Paula:)
Goldsmith Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 8:40 AM
Thanks for stopping over to read "Meeting In The Dark." Glad you found this to be, Exceptional writing. You just made my day a happy one. Thanks.... I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Night time is a great time to go writing away...................
George Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 9:55 PM
Lovely meeting of the lovers in dark, unseen by prying eyes and rumor mongers. Make the best use of this 'chance encounter'.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 8:39 AM
Thanks for stopping over to read "Meeting In The Dark." Glad you enjoyed this write. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Yes, lovers away from eyes. Night time is a great time to go writing away...................
Croft Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:51 AM
So very nice love the last line!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:57 AM
Thanks for stopping over to read "Meeting In The Dark." Glad you found this to be, So very nice. Great to hear you, love the last line. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Night time is a great time to go writing away...................
Rodrigues Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 7:35 PM
Enjoyed!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:55 AM
Thanks for stopping over to read "Meeting In The Dark." Glad you enjoyed this write. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Night time is a great time to go writing away...................
Wolf Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 7:02 PM
Those first four lines are enough to send chills p most spines, methinks. ~ gw
Goldsmith Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:54 AM
Thanks for stopping over to read "Meeting In The Dark." Glad you enjoyed this write. Too bad the first four lines are true in real life. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Night time is a great time to go writing away...................
Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 1:44 PM
Love the way you worked in the phrase she gave us. Very clever there
Goldsmith Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 2:33 PM
Thanks for stopping over to read "Meeting In The Dark." Glad you found this to be, Very clever there. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Night time is a great time to go writing away...................
Goldsmith Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 11:44 AM
"Meeting In The Dark." ~Date Written :5/17/2026 ~ Written By Human Poet...............
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