Meeting gthosts

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As a young four- to five-year-old child,
My wish to meet ghosts grew eerie and wild.
We lived a mile from a riverbed’s shore,
Where tales of witches and spirits galore,
Roamed through the night in the darkness, compiled.

By day, vultures circled in the sky,
Snatching at food, as they swooped low and high.
I heard they sometimes took children away,
But the fear of ghosts at night held more sway,
The thought of their presence made me ask why.

On full moon nights, tales would come alive,
Ghosts on palm trees when the clock struck five.
I stayed awake, my eyes wide with dread,
Saw moonlit figures with drinks overhead,
A toddy beer fest where spirits would thrive.

Still curious, I watched the mirror late,
Hoping to glimpse a ghostly figure's fate.
For months I waited till sleep took its toll,
Then shrieked one night as fear grabbed my soul,
I fainted, convinced by what I did state.

When I awoke, I told them my fright,
I’d seen the ghost appear in the night.
By morning the mirror was taken away,
With neem and salt for ghosts in dismay—
Yet, deep in my heart, the fear still took flight.








Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 10/14/2024 10:05:00 PM
Enjoyed this beautifully rhyming poem of horror. This suits to the spirit of Halloween. As children most of us had great dread for ghosts, generated in us through listening to stories. As I grew up, I am no more afraid of ghosts.
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Date: 10/11/2024 10:48:00 AM
Hello Jay, So cleverly written. I always wanted to see real ghosts and spirits as a child. Growing up on a farm, I knew there were many stories and tales about the farm. At night a barn is very scarey to a child. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 10/10/2024 11:32:00 PM
A write that ( highlights for me ) our current Reality 2020 till now, and the onerous pressure Applied by 'dark pagan forces' worldwide.' Still their fate will be worse than any hinted In your verse.' All the best Jah.'
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Date: 10/10/2024 6:08:00 PM
Poor child. So many things look scary at night. This poem captures the Halloween spirit and the fears of children. Nicely written.
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Date: 10/10/2024 1:51:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Meeting ghosts" story/write. Great picture... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun/blessed day..................
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