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Meeting Expectations

Hello, and thanks for coming Please come in and take a seat It’s nice to get familiar With each of you I’m supposed to meet I know I was just born yesterday But that doesn’t mean I am naive And I welcome the chance to adjust some of you Before the maternity ward I leave I know most of you are generated By my parental units, of course And some of you through society And cultural norms will be enforced But please respect me as an individual With unique talents and some faults Don’t paint me into corners Don’t make my freedom pay the costs Expectations can be a burden As well as a measuring stick My journey will be challenging enough Without too many of you interfering with it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/22/2011 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win Joe in Paula Swanson's contest "Meeting Expectations". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/9/2011 4:21:00 AM
A Masterpiece,! Joe. Thank you for sharing and many congrats on your well deserved FIRST PLACE win. Lainie
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Date: 2/5/2011 9:07:00 AM
Hi Joe - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fine poem. This has decent descriptiveness and rhyming which make it a pleasure to read.
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Date: 2/3/2011 4:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/2/2011 10:27:00 PM
What a cool introduction to life. I can see how this one got first place. Congratulations, Joe. This is so insightful. And clever! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/2/2011 4:55:00 PM
Oh, well done. Wonderful theme. Congratulations on your winning position with this wonderful poem. Best wishes. Deb
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Date: 2/2/2011 4:41:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light &Love
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:26:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your first place winning poem in Meeting Expectations contest .. charming entry my friend ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Joe
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Date: 2/2/2011 10:25:00 AM
great one Joe, I missed this the first time around, Congrats on your first place win
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Date: 2/2/2011 8:48:00 AM
Very unique approach to the contest Joe. I am glad to see your no. 1 rating. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/2/2011 8:00:00 AM
Very novel approach, greeting the expectations you are supposed to meet in the first verse. Great poem, Joe. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/24/2011 5:50:00 AM
Your journey sounds mysterious and full of surprises. Good one Joe. All the best for the contest.
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