Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Meet Me There

Meet me there~ when halo of the eventide
Scripts clandestine hints of twilight dreams
Invoking passions pink of romantic musings
Upon horizon’s smile glistening lapis lazuli
Where you are lost gazing sunset tangerine
As the sun folds in blue sea~ meet me there

May 16, 2021
Placed 1st: All yours (May 25) by Brian Strand

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Valsa George December 14, 2021 at 5:15 AM You script clandestine dreams for all your readers ! This is a poetic gem...! The rendezvous suggested for meeting is just heavenly !

Gershon Wolf June 16, 2021 at 5:23 PM Such a pretty picture you have painted with your talented pen, Vijay. Sweetness and Light, Gershon Vijay Pandit June 17, 2021 at 4:57 AM Much appreciate Gershon. Many thanks.

Sara Kendrick May 26, 2021 at 5:58 AM Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Very colorful work. Sara Vijay Pandit June 17, 2021 at 4:56 AM Thank you Sara.

Jennifer Proxenos May 24, 2021 at 9:59 AM Romantic, sensuous and truly evocative. I have to fave this write as although all your poems bear witness to your talent, this one though short, says it all in 6 lines. Hugs and blessings Vijay, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit June 17, 2021 at 4:56 AM Thank you Jennifer.

Jan Allison May 20, 2021 at 4:10 PM an absolute joy to read the imagery is delightful:-) hugs jan xx Vijay Pandit May 21, 2021 at 4:51 AM Much appreciate Jan--many thanks.

Paul Callus May 20, 2021 at 5:21 AM This must be your very own corner of Eden, Vijay! Beautiful in all its colourful imagery. Regards // paul Vijay Pandit May 20, 2021 at 7:34 AM Thank you Paul--much appreciate your visit and comments. Regards.

Kim Rodrigues May 19, 2021 at 8:32 AM Meet me there...where colors gleam and imagine the romantic...beautiful, dear friend! Vijay Pandit May 19, 2021 at 9:55 AM Much appreciate my friend. Many thanks Kim for your visit and kind feedback.

Harry Horsman May 18, 2021 at 11:36 PM How could one not fall in love, in this a wonderful scene. Vijay Pandit May 19, 2021 at 4:45 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments Harry--many thanks.

Quoth Theraven May 18, 2021 at 8:57 PM Vijay, Very nice flow to this Verse. The end rightly justifies the means. Even in clandestine dreams. -Richard Vijay Pandit May 19, 2021 at 4:44 AM Much appreciate Richard--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel May 18, 2021 at 2:16 AM Sounds like a lovely place to meet, Vijay, well crafted with unique words woven into it:) Vijay Pandit May 19, 2021 at 4:44 AM Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Heidi Sands May 17, 2021 at 3:00 PM Oh wow! I love this! What a special place to meet! Beautiful poem to read tonight. A fave too :) Vijay Pandit May 19, 2021 at 4:44 AM Much appreciate Heidi. Many thanks for the FAVE and your wonderful comments.

Akkina Downing May 17, 2021 at 1:31 PM WOW WOW!!! Vijay, what a gorgeous poem! I loved it and going to fave it :) Vijay Pandit May 17, 2021 at 2:13 PM Joy to see you back my friend. Many thanks for your kind remarks, Akkina. Much appreciate as always. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Smita Kulkarni May 17, 2021 at 12:46 PM Wow! What a beautiful and colorful spot you have for a romantic meeting!!! I really liked how you have used 'lapis lazuli' in your poem, absolutely unique! Vijay Pandit May 17, 2021 at 2:12 PM Happy to read your comments, Smita. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks for stopping by.

Richard Lamoureux May 17, 2021 at 6:56 AM Sounds like a great spot to meet. Vijay Pandit May 17, 2021 at 2:11 PM Thank you Richard--much appreciate.

Supraja Kannan May 17, 2021 at 3:32 AM Your words shine like the colorful gems. So beautifully written. I have never heard of 'Lapis lazuli'. Thanks for letting me learn some new things... Vijay Pandit May 17, 2021 at 4:52 AM Glad you could visit with your lovely comments. Much appreciate--many thanks, Supraja.

Victor Buhagiar May 17, 2021 at 2:53 AM I am sure I commented on this lovely poem. There seem to be too many glitches' around. Your imagery always excels and have the mark of a true poet. Vijay Pandit May 17, 2021 at 4:51 AM So very kind of you Victor. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole May 16, 2021 at 5:47 PM This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. The images you paint are simply breathtaking. "As the sun folds in blue sea" This thought leave me in complete awe. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit May 17, 2021 at 4:51 AM Happy to read your comments, Brandy. Much appreciate as always. Many thanks my friend.

Alexis Y. May 16, 2021 at 4:50 PM WoW!Vijay, You have a penned such a gorgeous surprise. I found it to be so romantic. Your six lines invoke so much imagery; it is such a breathtaking sight. Best wishes in the contest. Well done:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit May 17, 2021 at 4:50 AM Glad you could visit with your lovely comments, Alexis. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose May 16, 2021 at 2:41 PM You have surprised me with a beautiful poem full of color and emotion, well done, Vijay :) Vijay Pandit May 17, 2021 at 4:49 AM Thank you Vienna. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Regina Mcintosh May 16, 2021 at 11:23 AM Lovely words. God bless you always, sweet friend. Love, Gina Vijay Pandit May 17, 2021 at 4:48 AM That is very kind--much appreciate, Gina--many thanks.

Tom Cunningham May 16, 2021 at 11:09 AM Sounds a very romantic place to meet Vijay, good luck in the contest. Tom Vijay Pandit May 17, 2021 at 4:48 AM Thank you Tom--much appreciate, as always.

Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2021 at 10:37 AM I agree with Demetrios. A pearl of a poem!! Vijay Pandit May 17, 2021 at 4:48 AM So special to hear that from you Andrea. Many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis May 16, 2021 at 10:06 AM A pearl of a poem! Masterful versification, my dearest friend, Vijay. Good luck! Vijay Pandit May 17, 2021 at 4:47 AM So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate as always. Many thanks, Demetrios.