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Meet Me There

Meet me there~ when halo of the eventide Scripts clandestine hints of twilight dreams Invoking passions pink of romantic musings Upon horizon’s smile glistening lapis lazuli Where you are lost gazing sunset tangerine As the sun folds in blue sea~ meet me there May 16, 2021 Placed 1st: All yours (May 25) by Brian Strand

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Valsa George

Date: 12/14/2021 5:15:00 AM

You script clandestine dreams for all your readers ! This is a poetic gem...! The rendezvous suggested for meeting is just heavenly !

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/16/2021 5:23:00 PM

Such a pretty picture you have painted with your talented pen, Vijay. Sweetness and Light, Gershon

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/17/2021 4:57:00 AM

Much appreciate Gershon. Many thanks.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/26/2021 5:58:00 AM

Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Very colorful work. Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/17/2021 4:56:00 AM

Thank you Sara.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/24/2021 9:59:00 AM

Romantic, sensuous and truly evocative. I have to fave this write as although all your poems bear witness to your talent, this one though short, says it all in 6 lines. Hugs and blessings Vijay, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/17/2021 4:56:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/20/2021 4:10:00 PM

an absolute joy to read the imagery is delightful:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2021 4:51:00 AM

Much appreciate Jan--many thanks.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/20/2021 5:21:00 AM

This must be your very own corner of Eden, Vijay! Beautiful in all its colourful imagery. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/20/2021 7:34:00 AM

Thank you Paul--much appreciate your visit and comments. Regards.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/19/2021 8:32:00 AM

Meet me there...where colors gleam and imagine the romantic...beautiful, dear friend!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2021 9:55:00 AM

Much appreciate my friend. Many thanks Kim for your visit and kind feedback.

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/18/2021 11:36:00 PM

How could one not fall in love, in this a wonderful scene.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2021 4:45:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments Harry--many thanks.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/18/2021 8:57:00 PM

Vijay, Very nice flow to this Verse. The end rightly justifies the means. Even in clandestine dreams. -Richard

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2021 4:44:00 AM

Much appreciate Richard--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/18/2021 2:16:00 AM

Sounds like a lovely place to meet, Vijay, well crafted with unique words woven into it:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2021 4:44:00 AM

Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/17/2021 3:00:00 PM

Oh wow! I love this! What a special place to meet! Beautiful poem to read tonight. A fave too :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2021 4:44:00 AM

Much appreciate Heidi. Many thanks for the FAVE and your wonderful comments.

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/17/2021 1:31:00 PM

WOW WOW!!! Vijay, what a gorgeous poem! I loved it and going to fave it :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2021 2:13:00 PM

Joy to see you back my friend. Many thanks for your kind remarks, Akkina. Much appreciate as always. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 5/17/2021 12:46:00 PM

Wow! What a beautiful and colorful spot you have for a romantic meeting!!! I really liked how you have used 'lapis lazuli' in your poem, absolutely unique!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2021 2:12:00 PM

Happy to read your comments, Smita. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks for stopping by.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/17/2021 6:56:00 AM

Sounds like a great spot to meet.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2021 2:11:00 PM

Thank you Richard--much appreciate.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 5/17/2021 3:32:00 AM

Your words shine like the colorful gems. So beautifully written. I have never heard of 'Lapis lazuli'. Thanks for letting me learn some new things...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2021 4:52:00 AM

Glad you could visit with your lovely comments. Much appreciate--many thanks, Supraja.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/17/2021 2:53:00 AM

I am sure I commented on this lovely poem. There seem to be too many glitches' around. Your imagery always excels and have the mark of a true poet.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2021 4:51:00 AM

So very kind of you Victor. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/16/2021 5:47:00 PM

This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. The images you paint are simply breathtaking. "As the sun folds in blue sea" This thought leave me in complete awe. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2021 4:51:00 AM

Happy to read your comments, Brandy. Much appreciate as always. Many thanks my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/16/2021 4:50:00 PM

WoW!Vijay, You have a penned such a gorgeous surprise. I found it to be so romantic. Your six lines invoke so much imagery; it is such a breathtaking sight. Best wishes in the contest. Well done:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2021 4:50:00 AM

Glad you could visit with your lovely comments, Alexis. Much appreciate--many thanks.