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Meet Me In Avalon

Can you envision us lost in a world
          of ours; paradise built by the Gods
      just for us two? Would you taste with me
              a delectable slice of heaven?
             Picture us astride upon satyrs...

  exploring a mythical, enchanted land, drifting
        our way across it like dandelion seeds.
     Perchance we'd gambol about the verdure
       with carefree abandon, tasting freedom 
      with salivating tongues as we shout "Olé!"

     Perchance we'd take flight with the faeries
   and hum a tune from nightingales, or just lie 
in delightful tranquility beneath a weeping willow, 
 swept off by a soothing breeze. Or we could just 
         quietly bask in the bright midday sun!

            Can you imagine passionate kisses
      under a cascading waterfall with a rainbow 
     hovering right above it? Can you imagine us
        lying on a swinging hammock gazing at
        diamonds littered in skies of blackboard?

        Can you imagine these embarrassment
       of riches? Let's take this great adventure! 
       Let us discover the true meaning of bliss!
                     Baby, close your eyes
                           and meet me...

                              in Avalon!



Can You Imagine - Any Form Poetry Contest(Winner 1st Place)
Sponsored by Constance La France
Date written: 01/23/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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La France Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my Can You Imagine contest with this excellent poem, I loved it and your image too _Constance
Seeker Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 5:08 AM
Superb write! Congrats on your win!
Ibeh Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 6:53 AM
Thank you so much, Seeker:-) Most appreciated.
Jayasankar Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 1:23 AM
A poem so vivid and descriptive. Congrats on your first place win in the contest Edward. God bless. ~ Ani
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 12:40 PM
Hello Edward, you created a beautiful romantic poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Hello Edward, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 4:36 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene:-) Enjoy your day as well!
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