Meditative Space

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I inhabit a sacred expanse, Lined with the finest ingots of light As heaves from this bosom Climb on a mantra's trail of love So quiet, I meet my god self.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/25/2025 7:46:00 AM

Nette, sounds like you have the ability to get to a wonderful space. Some of us can, but not many. It's worthy to try and get there, and you make it sound really good in a simple way. Smiles!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/11/2025 10:04:00 AM

What a lovely write you have here. "Good Luck" Have a fun day as you write away..............

Tom Woody

Date: 3/10/2025 4:15:00 PM

Serene poetry Nette. We're all made in the image of God. Hey, can we join you?