Meditation

Musical mindfulness Energy enters exits encourages Divine dialogue Indigo innermost journey That teaches And Tailors thoughts In every part Of the body Needing peach peace

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/20/2024 8:23:00 AM

An alliterative acrostic, imaginative and creative. Very nice Karen! I like the "Musical mindfulness..." :)

Karen Jones
Date: 2/20/2024 8:30:00 AM

Thanks for your kind comments Linda

Robert Schatz

Date: 2/18/2024 8:28:00 PM

I like how you put a visual onto "peace" Both the color and the softness of the fruit feel right

Karen Jones
Date: 2/18/2024 9:05:00 PM

Thank you Robert

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/17/2024 7:57:00 PM

Super intro to Meditation, dear poet. Just send me my mantra, and I'm ready to go. ~ Yoga Berra

Karen Jones
Date: 2/17/2024 8:49:00 PM

Thanks for reading so many of my poems

Karen Jones
Date: 2/17/2024 8:48:00 PM

Lol OK ;0)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/17/2024 4:53:00 PM

a cut above with this acrostic! Liked the last line "needing peach peace.' Wonderful image.

Karen Jones
Date: 2/17/2024 5:34:00 PM

Thanks have a great weekend