Mediocrity In My Nation

In this modern day world where being average is applauded,
Wannabe’s and the fame hungry incomprehensibly rewarded.
These days it seems the talent less succeed, 
Their lack of skills, and humility, beaten by only their greed.

The young and indulgent, saying  ‘I want to be different’,
If only they could see their words inconsistent,
For if they truly meant what they said, 
Then they surely would do something else instead,
A doctor, a scientist, an architect maybe,
These jobs are ‘different’!…or perhaps that’s just me?!!

Wouldn’t it be great to find a cure for cancer,
‘nah’ say  these kids, ‘I wannabe a dancer’,
Well then how about being the next Albert Einstein,
‘no thanks, I’ll marry a footballer, his money will be mine!‘.

‘Celebrities’ intelligence, seemingly minimal,
Look at their lifestyles,  their luxuries criminal,
And just how do they go about getting these things,
Often by showing their breast and belly button rings.

These comments harsh…in some cases untrue,
Some have skill and work hard at what they do,
But watching the news brings total frustration,
Gone are the days when I was proud of my nation.
.
Go out get a job, work hard and graft,
Not like so many, living off mum’s overdraft,
Kids and benefits, a modern day goal,
No wonder my country has lost its soul….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/20/2025 11:47:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/26/2016 11:12:00 AM
LEE, Excellent read. Great flowing piece. Have a nice day. ** SKAT **
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Date: 2/19/2011 4:45:00 PM
Great descriptiveness and rhyming in this interesting submission. Good work.
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Date: 12/3/2010 11:44:00 PM
Hi Lee.Sadly we seem to be living in a materialistic age.Where standards and values have changed. Some of the problems in Eng stem from our welfare state.Everything has the potential for good or evil.Unfortunately it has been abused.But the biggest problem is the breakdown of the family,the nucleus of society.I feel the world's soul is a bit sick not lost and will turn a corner if we who care don't give up.This is a good poem Lee.So well written.Gets me thinking.I love it.Love June(Sylvia)
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Date: 11/14/2010 1:04:00 AM
Good one! Oh so true
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Date: 11/13/2010 12:41:00 PM
Did make me smile, perfect observation and sentiments echoed around the country
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Date: 11/9/2010 2:39:00 PM
i enjoyed this poem,, has lots of great meaning and thoughts behind your words. Sad thoughts as well, enjoyed your poem, have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 11/5/2010 10:17:00 AM
Enjoyed reading the many diverse poems here today. I am glad to have came across yours amongst these wonderful poems Lee. Wishing you a magnificent weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2010 7:24:00 AM
this is a true picture of modern world.not your country alone,but the whole world has lost soul.FABIYAS
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Date: 11/4/2010 2:08:00 PM
You are right, ethics and morality have gone low everywhere, Lee
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Date: 11/4/2010 1:53:00 PM
definitley a true view of the almost near collapse of morality, and the loss of good role models that exacerbate it all instead of counterbalancing things.
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Date: 11/4/2010 12:51:00 PM
There is some truth in this one for sure..I am glad that I chose this one as one of the ones that I read today..Sara
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Date: 11/4/2010 12:51:00 PM
The work ethic has disappeared and is no longer seen in our youth. Many of these "wannabes" do nothing but play video games while living off their parents. I share your frustration, Lee. They have no meaningful aspirations for the future. What can we do? The "greatest generation" set a standard that no one can meet today. And a lot of the celebrities kids try to emulate lead miserable, lonely lives in spite of their wealth. I wish I was still teaching so I could read this to my students.
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