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Medicine Bow Sunset

Sunset over the mountains
fire brilliant shades of orange and red
     lacing though the trees
colors disappearing..
....reappearing, with every 
twist of the winding pass
each turn unveiling new colors
bolder, brighter than before

Sun's rays dedcending
radiant golden beams 
caressing snow capped peaks
tickling aspen leaves until they shudder
bright gold disks sparkling, dancing

Hues darken, turning deep blue, purple
and black as night advances
orange and red fading as 
they outline the softening peaks.

Late evening storm clouds roll
into the valley
flash of lightening, blinding
clap of thunder, rumbling
stars peer though the encroaching darkness
    winking in merriment.

     God's country,
          Daddy's playground.



Note: Medicine Bow Mountain Range, over Cameron Pass, in the northern Colorado Rockies-
where my Father rests...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/16/2009 11:37:00 AM
all this lulling us into a false sence of security that God is not angry with us. jhl
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Date: 12/15/2009 12:56:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soup this week Trudy, beautiful piece & it sounds idylic >> James
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Date: 12/15/2009 2:35:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserving honor. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/14/2009 8:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week.. nice to see older poems again
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Date: 12/14/2009 6:13:00 PM
Good use of imagery to paint a picture with words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 12/14/2009 11:21:00 AM
Trudy - many congrats on being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/14/2009 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured at PoetrySoup this week Trudy. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/14/2009 5:36:00 AM
congrats on being featured this week
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Date: 12/13/2009 11:27:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Trudy.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/27/2008 6:45:00 AM
What a beatiful description and a beautiful dedication to a land that your Dad must have cherished! A portrait of the land, and your love for him. Lovely~Carrie
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Date: 9/27/2008 2:50:00 AM
Absolutely stunning. Brilliant imagery. What a place! And what an incredible resting place for your dad, and for you to visit him there. Got chills at the end of this, reading your note. Love, Shar
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