Medical Mystery

Whenever you're not feelin good

you go to the Doc like you should

        If you need a pill

        which you probably will

he'll prescribe it like any Doc would.

This treatment began years ago

prescribing pills seems quite apropos

        But what gets my goat
        
        once that pill's down your throat

how does it know where to go?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/30/2011 4:49:00 AM
Congratulations Ralph for your win in the contest of Brian Strand "Two Thru Twelve". Love, Carol P. S. I was away and missed congrats on many of Brian's contests. I try but don't know if I will ever catch up.
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Date: 6/27/2011 6:43:00 PM
hahaha, very cute, my friend. A belated congrats on this one.
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Date: 6/20/2011 9:41:00 PM
Congrats Ralph on your HM in the contest with this amazing entry my friend.. enjoy special honor with luv.. humor is best medicine luv..
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Date: 9/27/2010 8:11:00 PM
You're so funny! Beats me how the medication works and I'm glad I don't take any. Enjoyed your double-limerick!
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Date: 9/21/2010 7:39:00 AM
LOL, there are beautiful babes in my blog for you go comment! Light & Love
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Date: 9/19/2010 3:19:00 PM
That bothers many people...I am glad that the average person doesn't have to figure these things out..Got a chuckle..Glad that I chose this one to read today...Sara
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Date: 9/17/2010 5:50:00 AM
good thought to ponder....funny one too!!
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Date: 9/17/2010 4:48:00 AM
Very creative and humorous write on the medical mystery, Ralph
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Date: 9/17/2010 3:27:00 AM
Oh this is funny..I really like it!! Take care~Deb
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Date: 9/16/2010 10:08:00 PM
really nice elle may
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Date: 9/16/2010 9:30:00 PM
hahaha, love it
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