Premiere Contest WinnerMedallion Moments

Medallion moments dawdle,
shading hints of ruby and brass-
grains of sand linger,
like lost sand in an hourglass. 

I feel the blazing embers of
heated passion in a lover's dream-
the sanctity of a desert landscape, 
feathering a vista so serene. 




July 24th, 2017  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Poteet Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Delightful, Laura, the reds and browns intermixed with brassy orange. Fiery color here in more than one dimension.
Wood Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 3:26 PM
Really pretty Laura. Congratulations on your win! -- Dean
Ashley Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 7:56 PM
Hi Laura, this is so lovely. Congratulations on your win :)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 7:18 PM
This is very well written. Love the imagery. Congratulations.
Daniel Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 8:30 AM
Wonderful and fantastic, Luloo:)
Andresen Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 1:43 PM
- Make that 3 beautifuls :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Make that 2 beautifuls:) I love it, Laura.
Scars Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 5:28 AM
Thank you DT!!
Wolf Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 6:02 AM
Simply beautiful, Laura!
Scars Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 5:28 AM
Thank you WW!!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace