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Measures ...inspired by 'Especially When The October Wind' by Dylan Thomas October blows a symphony of sighs with blustry gusts that presage winter's bleak arrival as I shuffle through the park, kaleidoscope of leaves a welcome prize. Swings unswung on, roundabouts without the rush of children stutter to a halt. October blood suffuses to the hilt my heavy heart, and calms a soul in doubt. Images, bright images that have no need of language, the pictures tell the tale, a gang of schoolboys, picnic-packed, hale and hearty, hoping for a hint of snow, their teacher, raven-black, with no command. Oaks stand guard, ramrod-straight like sentries, rhododendrons, strong and sprawling bushes, a place to smoke illicit contraband. The dial at sunlight's pleasure points to time, the weather vane makes plain the wind's direction, no need of clock or any vain contraption to guage the day, its reason or its rhyme. The stillness of the morning and the day-glow, and meadow grasses blessing me with softness, the rippled waters thrilling me with sweetness, what other measures do I need to know? October blows a symphony of sighs, of spells and incantations for the wise, who, weather-worn and beaten, seek the skies or haunt the woodlands for a siren's eyes, for nature is the most compelling teacher, companion to my father and my mother, she cavils, then is kind, just like a brother, and binds our earthly tapestry together.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/13/2009 9:55:00 AM
I can feel the coming of winter in the children's expectations for snow days, Keith. The reader can truly see all that is around them as "October blows a symphony of sighs...incantations...and spells." Captivating poetry, Keith. One of the best I've read here on the Soup. Thank you for guiding me to it! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/27/2008 2:15:00 AM
Oh, now you have gone and done it! Touched me in my weakest spot - the wind. The wind and I as lovers and always has it been. :) LOVE lines 7+8 especially. Amazing words choices (I can see you are a lover of words yourself) I could taste every savory word. And feel ther wind, as well. If you are a fall, nature and wind lover, you may enjoy a few of my earlier ones...the wind and I...Winter's Goodbye...and, an autumn soul. Have a wonderful day! ove, Kristin
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Date: 11/23/2008 4:51:00 PM
This is a very beautiful poem, Keith. It flows so perfectly and smooth that it wrapped itself around me as I read it. It was easy to imagine walking through that park. "October blows a symphony of sighs" I love that phrase. Thank you for sharing it with me. I am not well read, as far as the classics go, and I wanted to read the poem that ispired this , but I couldn't find it. I am going to read it and then read this again. You are such a talented writer. Thank you for inspiring me. Love Robin
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