Measure For Measure

An eye for an eye
Soon the world was blind
A place full of misery 
Not one person was kind

People chose to get even
They believed in blow for blow
The bodies all stacked up
Corpses laid in a row

Forgiveness not heard of
Or the first going last
Antiquated ideas
Remnants of the past

Measure for measure
Cruel justice ruled the day
Each and every person
Had a debt to pay

The Bibles all burned
No saints could be found
The lovers of peace
All hidden underground 

They waited their time
Those on the surface died
The keys to the cities
From dead fingers pried

"Blessed are the peace keepers"
They inherited the Earth
The past not the future
We witness new birth


For Dr. Ram's Measure for Measure Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Congratulations Richard! You express the bible's teaching in your own unique way. Both you and Dave were thinking on similar lines. // paul
Sietesantos Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 9:49 AM
Hi Richard, congratulations on your top win! Well-deserved! I enjoyed reading this poetic gem!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 10:07 AM
Thanks Pandita, I appreciate your kindness.
Johnson Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 9:43 AM
Starkly real your poem. Great interpretation of contest. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Lamoureux Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Thanks Joyce.
Smith Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 9:10 AM
Stopping back with congratulations...I haven't seen the gender bender results..it says it was judged..
A. Sharma Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 7:53 AM
So well penned perfect to theme ! Wish I had read earlier Richard ! I cud not really make out what to write ,,, It's so deep n thought provoking ! Congrats on huge win !
Walker  Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 6:38 AM
Rick, congratulations on your win... Verlena
Smith Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 6:19 AM
Wow! Richard.. This is such a deep, though out lesson.. Congrats on a great win!... Hugs.. Arlene..
Mehta Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 5:02 AM
Thanks for participating in the contest and congrats on a fine win, Richard
Walker  Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 11:29 PM
Rick, you roc! This is a well written. GL in the contest. Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 7:22 AM
Thanks Verlena.
Sergi Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 1:08 PM
Hi Richard: Congrats on your bawdy poem and thanks for the comment on mine.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 7:22 AM
It was my pleasure Ralph.
Lindley Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 9:10 PM
My friend this is a super fine write!!! Absolutely great from start to fine finish... BBBBBravo!!!!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 7:48 AM
You are kind Robert.
Sirak Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 6:12 AM
Fantastic message here. Measure for Measure every word has powerful meaning.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 7:17 AM
Thanks Monterey.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 5:39 AM
This is just wonderful Richard. I tried and tried to think of something to write for this contest, but nothing came to me. I see this one in Lights!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 7:04 AM
Thanks Connie, I hope you are right. Have a great week.
Hamilton Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 5:27 PM
a very wise yet deep poem Rick ty I sorted out the count hugs
Dylan Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 11:00 PM
wow its sounds like you are writing about revelation.... awesome writing.... Blessed are the peace keepers... Ending is wonderful .... many blessings to you
Lamoureux Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 7:09 AM
Thank you Brooke, always happy to recieve blessings.
Nance Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 8:50 PM
I didn't know what the term measure for measure meant when I wrote for the contest, yours makes sense, I liked the happy ending, the new birth.Hopefully this will give you a new shiny medal to place upon your trophy stand. well done :)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 9:20 PM
I'm not sure if that's what it means but that's what came to mind. Thanks for the thoughtful visit.
Sergi Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 8:04 PM
Hi Richard: A very tense and plaintive poem. I believe this is a winner!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 9:19 PM
I meant Ralph, darn these fat fingers *lol*
Lamoureux Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 9:18 PM
I hope you're right Al.
Smith Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 6:03 PM
Very nice Richard...I like your take on the contest
Lamoureux Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 9:17 PM
Thanks Tim, this just popped into my head.
Manassian Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 4:28 PM
Amen. Beautiful in every way. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 5:22 PM
Hi Eileen, how are you doing today?
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