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Meanwhile, Back in the Garden of Eden

The Tree of Knowledge said, "Hey, Tree of Life I miss that ripped Adam and his sexy wife" The snake slithered and he hissed The trees vowed, "No more of this!" Whoosh! Breeze blew that snake into afterlife

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/2/2024 8:26:00 AM

Love it! The serpentine wind reveals the afterlife, it is good!

Bill Baker

Date: 1/1/2024 5:48:00 PM

Good one, gw. Get rid of the snakes, good call. Got a smile out of me, my friend. Write On! Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/1/2024 1:29:00 PM

What a creative Limerick write. Love the ending. May this be your best year ever. Have a blessed day................

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/1/2024 9:37:00 AM

Good thought of a reversal for the snake (though it's really a serpent. Snakes are good). It would be interesting to go back in time. Your poem keeps me thinking.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/1/2024 7:39:00 PM

You're right, Hilda. I should have asped you b4 I wrote this. Smiles, Gershon

John Lawless

Date: 1/1/2024 7:00:00 AM

sadly, they found out that >>>>>steady....wait...wait...."Three's company"......oh no.....he didn't...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/1/2024 7:40:00 PM

By Gawd, he did, the blimey bloody fool...

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/1/2024 5:19:00 AM

well done, Gershon. Your muse must've imbibed in some of that new year's eve bubbly stuff :-)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 1/1/2024 4:48:00 AM

Very clever Gershon.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 1/1/2024 3:54:00 AM

The snake got up the breeze nose For slithering and hissing, I suppose, The two trees missed both Adam and Eve. Who was lying under a pile of leaves?