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Meanwhile, Back in the Garden of Eden

   The Tree of Knowledge said, "Hey, Tree of Life
   I miss that ripped Adam and his sexy wife"
      The snake slithered and he hissed
      The trees vowed, "No more of this!"
   Whoosh! Breeze blew that snake into afterlife

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/2/2024 8:26:00 AM Love it! The serpentine wind reveals the afterlife, it is good! Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 1/1/2024 5:48:00 PM Good one, gw. Get rid of the snakes, good call. Got a smile out of me, my friend. Write On! Bill Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/1/2024 1:29:00 PM What a creative Limerick write. Love the ending. May this be your best year ever. Have a blessed day................ Login to Reply

Hilda Greenhough Date: 1/1/2024 9:37:00 AM Good thought of a reversal for the snake (though it's really a serpent. Snakes are good). It would be interesting to go back in time. Your poem keeps me thinking. Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 1/1/2024 7:39:00 PM You're right, Hilda. I should have asped you b4 I wrote this. Smiles, Gershon

John Lawless Date: 1/1/2024 7:00:00 AM sadly, they found out that >>>>>steady....wait...wait...."Three's company"......oh no.....he didn't... Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 1/1/2024 7:40:00 PM By Gawd, he did, the blimey bloody fool...

Jerry Brotherton Date: 1/1/2024 4:48:00 AM Very clever Gershon. Login to Reply

Shirley Hawkins Date: 1/1/2024 3:54:00 AM The snake got up the breeze nose For slithering and hissing, I suppose, The two trees missed both Adam and Eve. Who was lying under a pile of leaves? Login to Reply