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My heart offers you its roses of red
to welcome love's scent from the purest soul
as we cast our fate on petals that spread
we'll pluck the passion's bloom our heart's control
rise to my love, as the journey's begun
embrace the sweet fragrance of love's desire
unmoor your heart as you savor the sun
so I'll find love in eyes of blue sapphire
let me fall gently in their chosen sphere
where my rose may quench its thirst of longing
with delicate soft whispers to the ear
we'll share a paradise of belonging
till your heart's soil and plant my rose within
Welcome the fragrant red roses again

3/18/23
contest Writing Challenge "M" Words
sponsor Constance La France
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La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 4:53 AM
Frederic, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Love the music !
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 9:16 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Frederic :) - hugs
Alex Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 9:05 AM
"with delicate soft whispers to the ear we'll share a paradise of belonging" - Such a beautiful poem. Congratulations!
Fowler Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 7:12 AM
Sweetly done Frederic. Congratulations on your win! :)
Faure Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 9:37 AM
I Love your poem thanks for sharing
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 2:04 PM
- Tender and beautiful sonnet, Frederic :) - Best wishes in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs
Turner Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Another excellent love sonnet, Frederic. You must be a glutton for punishment. LOL I thought your last poem was a winner. Perhaps Constance isn't into sonnets. Perseverance, a noble trait. Good luck my friend. I always love your sonnets:)
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