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Meaningful

My heart offers you its roses of red to welcome love's scent from the purest soul as we cast our fate on petals that spread we'll pluck the passion's bloom our heart's control rise to my love, as the journey's begun embrace the sweet fragrance of love's desire unmoor your heart as you savor the sun so I'll find love in eyes of blue sapphire let me fall gently in their chosen sphere where my rose may quench its thirst of longing with delicate soft whispers to the ear we'll share a paradise of belonging till your heart's soil and plant my rose within Welcome the fragrant red roses again 3/18/23 contest Writing Challenge "M" Words sponsor Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2023 4:53:00 AM

Frederic, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Love the music !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/21/2023 9:16:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations, Frederic :) - hugs

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/21/2023 9:05:00 AM

"with delicate soft whispers to the ear we'll share a paradise of belonging" - Such a beautiful poem. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/21/2023 7:12:00 AM

Sweetly done Frederic. Congratulations on your win! :)

Brenda J. Joyce

Date: 3/19/2023 9:37:00 AM

I Love your poem thanks for sharing

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/18/2023 2:04:00 PM

- Tender and beautiful sonnet, Frederic :) - Best wishes in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/18/2023 7:23:00 AM

Another excellent love sonnet, Frederic. You must be a glutton for punishment. LOL I thought your last poem was a winner. Perhaps Constance isn't into sonnets. Perseverance, a noble trait. Good luck my friend. I always love your sonnets:)