Meandering Stream

Ah, to spend a languid summer afternoon on the bank of a rippling stream,
Lying on my back watching vagabond clouds as I reminisce and dream!

I hear the soothing sound of the water's hymn as it plays its merry tune,
Blending its musical melody with that of a meadowlark and loon!

Did you begin thy sea-bound odyssey in yon mountains as melting snow,
To form a rushing mountain stream, later to grace these verdant leas below?

Or, were thy banks filled with tears from Heaven by some distant tempest?
Whate'er your source, with thy simple majesty I am truly, truly blest!  

Look!  Even the beautiful rainbow trout leap with joy in a placid pool!
There! A doe and her delicate fawn sip thy life-sustaining waters so cool!

You have provided this mere mortal with much needed peace and rest,
Flowing so gently past me as thence you pursue thy meandering quest!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 1 in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" Contest -
 June 2011
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Johnson Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 5:29 AM
great vistas cross my tangled mind, the water flows like the wine, lay on your back supple, recline, at peace down by the river ... great descriptive tale of tranquility... on ya Bob....
Brown Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 7:46 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Bob. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 1:24 AM
wow,robert! super cheers for the fine spot! :) huggs
Mills Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 1:13 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Mehta Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of constance,Bob
Dailey Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 7:10 AM
What a beautiful picture you paint with your poems. that is why I have to check out everything you have written every couple of days. Mike
Mannan Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 6:36 AM
Oh the tempting picture you've created. This is wonderful Bob. Many congrats for this win.
Poet Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 6:20 AM
I liked it first time around.Congrats Robert on your 1st place win.
Song Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 12:56 AM
Congrats, Charles!! Way to go with this magical write about a rippling spring. The rainbow trout leaping with joy is such a nice description for this poem! Glad to continue to read your work here on the soup. Gwendolen
Onclaud Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 9:42 PM
rober, a fine write.. many congrats, wow! :) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 8:29 PM
Congrats Bob on your first place win in Constance's contest with this splendid creation my friend.. luv..
La France Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 7:16 PM
Congratulations Robert on your shared first place win in my Rippling Stream contest, I think your poem is just divine. I have your address to send the certificate~~
A   Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 5:11 PM
A very rippling write..much a delight to read... The best of luck in the contest,..p.d.
Taylor Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 6:36 PM
Outstanding entry, Sarge. Excellent. Enjoyed. Good luck. Ralphie
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 11:31 PM
You have composed the life of a meandering stream. A beauty, Robert!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 3:54 PM
felt like I was in a magical land reading these lovely words Bob .. good luck in the contest.. we have been away down seashore..started out as three day Memorial weekend only ..now turning into ten days of R & R ..Ron says he is practicing for retirement..haha.. splashes to u and Mrs. from beach side luv..
Mehta Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 2:20 PM
Brilliant piece of poetic flight with apt images, Bob. Good luck in the contest,
Buys Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 12:34 PM
Such a peaceful poem, beautifully written and lovely imagery. A pleasure to read this one, well done and good luck. xoxo
Poet Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 12:08 PM
Wonderful imagery here Robert....Enjoyed.Best wishes....
Onclaud Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 11:29 AM
robert! you have a deep, serious side that is totally engaging! wow, nice to know this part of you! beautiful.. surely, a winner:) huggs, nette
Kendrick Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 10:56 AM
So descriptive and creative..I am sure Constance will enjoy this one..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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