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Meandering Stream

Ah, to spend a languid summer afternoon on the bank of a rippling stream, Lying on my back watching vagabond clouds as I reminisce and dream! I hear the soothing sound of the water's hymn as it plays its merry tune, Blending its musical melody with that of a meadowlark and loon! Did you begin thy sea-bound odyssey in yon mountains as melting snow, To form a rushing mountain stream, later to grace these verdant leas below? Or, were thy banks filled with tears from Heaven by some distant tempest? Whate'er your source, with thy simple majesty I am truly, truly blest! Look! Even the beautiful rainbow trout leap with joy in a placid pool! There! A doe and her delicate fawn sip thy life-sustaining waters so cool! You have provided this mere mortal with much needed peace and rest, Flowing so gently past me as thence you pursue thy meandering quest! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 1 in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" Contest - June 2011

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Date: 8/3/2011 5:29:00 AM
great vistas cross my tangled mind, the water flows like the wine, lay on your back supple, recline, at peace down by the river ... great descriptive tale of tranquility... on ya Bob....
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:24:00 AM
wow,robert! super cheers for the fine spot! :) huggs
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Date: 6/7/2011 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of constance,Bob
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Date: 6/6/2011 7:10:00 AM
What a beautiful picture you paint with your poems. that is why I have to check out everything you have written every couple of days. Mike
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Date: 6/6/2011 6:36:00 AM
Oh the tempting picture you've created. This is wonderful Bob. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 6/6/2011 6:20:00 AM
I liked it first time around.Congrats Robert on your 1st place win.
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Date: 6/6/2011 12:56:00 AM
Congrats, Charles!! Way to go with this magical write about a rippling spring. The rainbow trout leaping with joy is such a nice description for this poem! Glad to continue to read your work here on the soup. Gwendolen
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:42:00 PM
rober, a fine write.. many congrats, wow! :) huggs
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:29:00 PM
Congrats Bob on your first place win in Constance's contest with this splendid creation my friend.. luv..
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Date: 6/5/2011 7:16:00 PM
Congratulations Robert on your shared first place win in my Rippling Stream contest, I think your poem is just divine. I have your address to send the certificate~~
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Date: 6/5/2011 5:11:00 PM
A very rippling write..much a delight to read... The best of luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 6/3/2011 6:36:00 PM
Outstanding entry, Sarge. Excellent. Enjoyed. Good luck. Ralphie
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Date: 6/2/2011 11:31:00 PM
You have composed the life of a meandering stream. A beauty, Robert!
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Date: 6/2/2011 3:54:00 PM
felt like I was in a magical land reading these lovely words Bob .. good luck in the contest.. we have been away down seashore..started out as three day Memorial weekend only ..now turning into ten days of R & R ..Ron says he is practicing for retirement..haha.. splashes to u and Mrs. from beach side luv..
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Date: 6/2/2011 2:20:00 PM
Brilliant piece of poetic flight with apt images, Bob. Good luck in the contest,
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:34:00 PM
Such a peaceful poem, beautifully written and lovely imagery. A pleasure to read this one, well done and good luck. xoxo
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:08:00 PM
Wonderful imagery here Robert....Enjoyed.Best wishes....
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Date: 6/2/2011 11:29:00 AM
robert! you have a deep, serious side that is totally engaging! wow, nice to know this part of you! beautiful.. surely, a winner:) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/2/2011 10:56:00 AM
So descriptive and creative..I am sure Constance will enjoy this one..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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