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Meandering In Garden

Meandering In Garden

Written by: Sara Kendrick

Admirable benevolent man
Captivating capable love
Meandering in garden
Walk side by side steal glance
Absorb quiet_rose scent
Drawn like magnet
Eye contact
Hands touch
Kiss

Contest: "Nonet Me A Spring Kiss"
Sponsored by : Michael J Falotico

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Carol Fillmore

Date: 3/25/2011 6:49:00 PM

this is a romantic one, Sara:) Enjoyed the read! Thanks for your comment and best wishes on my entry for Haiku Beyond -- always appreciated! Carol

Robb A. Kopp

Date: 3/23/2011 10:57:00 AM

Wow, what A pungent taste it leaves on my inner eye!

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/21/2011 9:22:00 AM

Sara, I love your "meandering in garden" line good luck for MJF's contest with this romantic beauty.. How are you feeling today?

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/20/2011 2:16:00 PM

A nice romantic walk in the garden followed by a kiss. Well what can be nicer than that. Good luck on the contest. love phyl

Kash Poet

Date: 3/20/2011 1:12:00 PM

Great romanticism here Sara!Enjoyed.-kashinath

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 3/20/2011 10:34:00 AM

Wow! What a great romantic poem. I loved reading it. Thanks for your educated comments on my poem The Gone bye Days. I am glad you are recovering speedily. Kiss the days of sufferings good bye. Best wishes. -Mohammad

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2011 11:09:00 PM

A very romantic one reminding me of a Bronte sister's tale. The benevolent man sounds wonderful!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/19/2011 5:34:00 PM

Feeling the emotion Sara in your lovely lines .. good luck in the contest.. certainly will be on winners list .. your view is vibrant and vivacious luv.. hope u are feeling better today my friend

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/19/2011 5:21:00 PM

Lovely sensual write on the spring kiss, Sara. I hope you are quite well after the surgery as yiour writing shows

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/19/2011 5:09:00 PM

Meandering in the garden...great phrase. enjoyed your poem. BG

Ellen Fahey

Date: 3/19/2011 4:56:00 PM

And best wishes to you with this winner, as well! Ellen

Ellen Fahey

Date: 3/19/2011 4:55:00 PM

Sooo sweet! I have never written this form of poetry. It seems like it would be difficult to do, but you make it look so easy! Thanks for your thoughtful comment. Ellen : )