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Mean Old Pumpkin

 I don't celebrate the pagan holiday of Halloween, but I DID want to write something for Russell's contest, so here is my rather 'unscary' offering.


I stood alone in the pumpkin patch, a child of three,
Searching for one perfectly shaped, but I didn't see
any that I liked to be my Jack-O-Lantern this year.
Then I heard a loud scary noise, and I cringed in fear.
"MOM," I cried! But she whispered, "Hush child. Go back to sleep."
Vines were crawling up my feet.  Are they supposed to creep?
"MOM," I screamed. "This spooky old pumpkin has big mean eyes."
But Mom was being pulled down a hole. I heard her cries!
Now it had a mouth full of teeth, all chomping at me!
Closed my eyes and screamed in fright. I'm just a child of three.
I couldn't move, frozen in fear; I was paralyzed...
being eaten by a pumpkin who was demonized!
There'll be no Halloween for me. It's uncivilized!

September 24th, 2017
Russell's Halloween Scare Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 11/9/2017 11:02:00 PM
Sorry Lin, my favorite time of the year (go figure). Your story seemed pretty scary to me.
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Date: 11/9/2017 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Lin - this was a lot of fun - keep up the great writing! :-)
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Date: 11/9/2017 6:43:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/1/2017 8:26:00 PM
Oh Lin. You did GREAT . It makes no difference if you celebrate that holiday or not. You did a great nightmare before Halloween type of poem
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Date: 9/25/2017 6:35:00 AM
I like your 'little' scare, and can relate with that last line:)
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Date: 9/24/2017 10:07:00 PM
Ha! Love that last line :) scary fun write Lin. Reminds me of how big and scary some things seemed when was so small. My best to you for the contest! xomo
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Date: 9/24/2017 11:48:00 AM
Very creative and it is a unique take on the Halloween theme and it is scary! I too do not celebrate Halloween so find it difficult to write about it. Good luck with the contest (I doubt it will fill to capacity of 169 poems lol) :-) hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/24/2017 12:54:00 PM
Maybe not, and I'm sure this is not what Russ means by scary, but that's ok. It was fun to make it up, with apologies to Peanuts.
Date: 9/24/2017 11:32:00 AM
Lin you did well with this creative poem! Good luck in the contest :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/24/2017 11:37:00 AM
oh, thanks, Heidi, but it's just a fun write. It's not spooky, and I'm sure it won't take the place of a scary write that has a chance of winning since Russell has made room for 169.
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