Meal Ordeal Brevity

As I approached the doorway my heart went rat-a-tat-tat,
Just thinking about stepping onto the old welcome mat.
Because recently I ate way too much, and became too fat
Which, unfortunately meant that I was worth looking at.
So I planned on exercising in order to look more flat,
By ignoring the world like a selfish brat,
And once I made that decision, I stood pat.
For if I didn’t I’d be the first one that goes splat,
When scurrying out of the wall and getting caught by the cat!

For the Brevity contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Roper Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 6:24 PM
A 7, David, and very witty. Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Wigley Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 10:12 PM
Made me smile. Well done, David, good win. Regards, Viv
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July 15, 2015 at 1:38 AM
Hi David, Congratulations --Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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July 14, 2015 at 12:03 AM
David, Congratulations on your sweet win. Love SKAT
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 12:13 PM
A fat rat, very cute twist David. Big congratss on your First place win!
Allison Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 12:02 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Nance Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 8:37 AM
I love it, what a creative twist at the end! Perfect entry for my contest and well deserving of a first place win, thank you and grats!
Allison Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 3:59 AM
love humour and the clever twist - good luck in the contest:-) reminded me of a poem I wrote about a mouse we had in the house I called it houdini :-(hugs jan xx
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