meadow haiku

where the green seems to have un-rolled itself . . . marigold wealth

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/2/2025 1:14:00 PM

Andrea, funny to think of an unrolling green. How did you come up with that idea? It's a bit of magic. Smiles!!

Paige Hind

Date: 4/23/2025 9:25:00 PM

Beautiful haiku indeed- love this

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/23/2025 8:08:00 PM

Pretty!

Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/23/2025 1:23:00 PM

Hello Andrea, Very nice serenity in haiku green along the lines of "All that glisters..." -Richard

Jay Narain

Date: 4/23/2025 10:47:00 AM

Nice spring haiku.

Tom Woody

Date: 4/23/2025 6:00:00 AM

Who doesn't love a field of flowers? Pretty haiku

Ink Empress

Date: 4/23/2025 4:46:00 AM

How beautiful and profound is your hiku dear andrea! Youv delivered a very creative one i especially love the ending, as it made me pause and think! You always have a way with words and you write such excellent hikus! Best wishes! Sending you light always

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 4/23/2025 1:06:00 AM

A very beautiful haiku.Like it.