Meadow - 8 Lines of Beauty

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A golden meadow waves
In a breeze with messages
White daisies daintily sway
In the rising sunlight

There is music in the heart
Sparkling like the dew drops
On this shimmering path
Waiting for us to wander

Heidi Sands

6/29/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/29/2017 10:06:00 PM
It sounds like a beautiful summer morning, perfect for a walk. Really nice Heidi :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/30/2017 8:46:00 AM
Thank you Lenna. :) Actually it is still raining here. I took that photo nearby earlier on in the Fall.
Date: 6/29/2017 9:18:00 PM
There's definitely music in my heart and this is great :) Good luck in the contest!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/30/2017 8:45:00 AM
Hi Jeremy. That is great there is music in your heart! Thank you
Date: 6/29/2017 4:04:00 PM
Yes indeed, 8 lines of beauty!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/29/2017 4:05:00 PM
Thank you John :)
Date: 6/29/2017 3:38:00 PM
Absolutely stunning imagery Heidi I with I was walking through such a beautiful meadow.. but we have rain rain and more rain and I long to see the sun:-( hugs jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/29/2017 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Jan. I may add a photo to it, actually. I just thought of one. Yes, we have had a lot of rain here this Spring. Almost every day we get some rain, even after the sun comes out. Again today too. Hopefully more lasting sun for both of us soon. :)
Date: 6/29/2017 3:11:00 PM
Serenity is what I feel when reading this wonderful poem Heidi. 8 lines of beauty...you can say that again.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/29/2017 3:14:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris. Yes, serenity ! :)
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