Meadow - 8 Lines of Beauty

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A golden meadow waves In a breeze with messages White daisies daintily sway In the rising sunlight There is music in the heart Sparkling like the dew drops On this shimmering path Waiting for us to wander Heidi Sands 6/29/17

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Lenna Walker

Date: 6/29/2017 10:06:00 PM

It sounds like a beautiful summer morning, perfect for a walk. Really nice Heidi :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/30/2017 8:46:00 AM

Thank you Lenna. :) Actually it is still raining here. I took that photo nearby earlier on in the Fall.

Jeremy Smith

Date: 6/29/2017 9:18:00 PM

There's definitely music in my heart and this is great :) Good luck in the contest!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/30/2017 8:45:00 AM

Hi Jeremy. That is great there is music in your heart! Thank you

John Hamilton

Date: 6/29/2017 4:04:00 PM

Yes indeed, 8 lines of beauty!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/29/2017 4:05:00 PM

Thank you John :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/29/2017 3:38:00 PM

Absolutely stunning imagery Heidi I with I was walking through such a beautiful meadow.. but we have rain rain and more rain and I long to see the sun:-( hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/29/2017 4:02:00 PM

Thank you Jan. I may add a photo to it, actually. I just thought of one. Yes, we have had a lot of rain here this Spring. Almost every day we get some rain, even after the sun comes out. Again today too. Hopefully more lasting sun for both of us soon. :)

Chris Green

Date: 6/29/2017 3:11:00 PM

Serenity is what I feel when reading this wonderful poem Heidi. 8 lines of beauty...you can say that again.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/29/2017 3:14:00 PM

Thank you so much Chris. Yes, serenity ! :)