Mea Culpa

life’s precious fabric 
unravelling strand by strand
Earth weeps
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 9:47 AM
Enjoyed your Haiku my friend. Have a great week! Bill
Rees Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:22 AM
Thank you Bill for your comment on my rather pessimistic little poem about where mankind is heading.
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February 1, 2023 at 9:32 PM
Hi Peter…l had to look up the meaning of mea culpa “ who's fault was that” So is the fabric a metaphor for life's crisis? Have I got that right Peter? Debx
M  Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 1:20 AM
Yes it does they are both lovely….perhaps it was just me Peter not understanding l am no academic….l hope you didn't revise because of my comment? Debx
Rees Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 12:46 AM
Hi Deb I’ve revised the wording to make my meaning clearer. Does it help ? Peter.
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