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Me still as statue

shadow beautiful outline smooth as wife but mannequine touched her softly still dreaming oneness through feel though statue stood still wife shook my sweet dream real replacing plastic feel me still as statue ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- By Hitendra Mehta February 2011 Honours - 9th Place Members Contest - Special Sentimental Senryu Sponsor - Linda Marie - The Sweetheart of P.S.

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Date: 2/24/2011 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Hitendra. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 11:42:00 AM
Congrats Hitendra on your win :) -- really like how you ended this , made it come full circle :) very sweet & nicely written -- enjoyed reading this :D
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Date: 2/20/2011 2:37:00 PM
the verses are verying touching! Light & Love
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:41:00 AM
Congrats on being among the winners. Thanks for nice comments DÉirdre
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:03:00 AM
Congrats!!! for your well written entry in Lindas contest
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:41:00 AM
Congratulations on you win in Linda's contest with this profound Senryu~~
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:00:00 AM
Beautiful Senryu, dear Hitendra. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:11:00 PM
oh, and now to rate it! 7 of course.
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:10:00 PM
oh, my goodness, this is absolutely wonderful, HItendra, the way you took it to YOU still as a statue, struck dumb with awe at the end. Wow, congratulations. A fave!
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:50:00 PM
This is a wonderful write from you Hitendra !Congrats on your win---kashinath
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:06:00 PM
very very good and imaginative Hitendra. Congratulations to you!
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Date: 2/17/2011 12:02:00 PM
Hitendra, congratulations on your win in Linda's contest ;-)
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Date: 2/17/2011 10:11:00 AM
Hello Hitendra, Congratulations on your win my dear poet. I love the words you have penned here As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Hitendra. Enjoy it! Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/16/2011 9:11:00 PM
so unique and deserving of the great win, hitendra.. CONGRATS! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/16/2011 8:21:00 PM
Beautiful. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 2/16/2011 7:49:00 PM
Good triple entry here Hitendra. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with this.
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Date: 2/16/2011 7:31:00 PM
Congratulations Hitendra, on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:05:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, Hitendra
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:46:00 PM
Congrats Hitendra on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your support always ...
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Date: 2/13/2011 4:44:00 AM
this a splendid senryu
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Date: 2/11/2011 10:49:00 AM
Welcome back, Hitendra. Thank you for stopping by and visiting my poem. I hope you will be posting some new work soon! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/5/2011 6:43:00 PM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Hitendra.. I did a blog today on my contest so please go read about syllables and count luv.. appreciate the support and will read fully at judging time...good luck...
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Date: 2/5/2011 10:35:00 AM
Nice multiple senryu with nice pen picture, Hitendra
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Date: 2/5/2011 2:22:00 AM
Very curious how you were reaching to touch the statue and then became very still as your wife woke you. Perhaps you should haved continued dreaming, Hitendra. A very intriguing poem that really captures the reader's attention. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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