Me Still As Statue
shadow beautiful
outline smooth as wife
but mannequine
touched her softly still
dreaming oneness through feel
though statue stood still
wife shook my sweet dream
real replacing plastic feel
me still as statue
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By Hitendra Mehta
February 2011
Honours - 9th Place
Members Contest - Special Sentimental Senryu
Sponsor - Linda Marie - The Sweetheart of P.S.
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